hybridlore

@hybridlore

hmmm. What do you think of Me just removing the last paragraph completely? Would that be enough?

yes, I designed all of it.

I feel like their faces are wonky…

@ellette-giselle

Okay… here it is… hopefully it’s at least a little accurate—I feel like I may have butchered them. If there’s anything you don’t like, let me know—I can change or redo things. 😊😅

I’m so sorry I didn’t draw the combat boots… there were too many feet and I was exhausted. Ignore the hands too—could almost go without saying at t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle yep, pretty real to me lol

I might try it! If I can find a place to get the song.

@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore

I made some edits on the cover after some of the feedback I got.

@keilah-h

Lol, my characters are pretty real to me, and I guessed yours were to you. lololol.

You should totally try that!

@ellette-giselle The way you talked about Sniper sounds like he’s in the room looking over my shoulder at what I’m typing lolllllll

Which would actually be terrifying for a few reasons. But hey, it’s not like I haven’t also insinuated that my characters actually exist and know what I think of them lol

Anyway, that song is super cool, fits Ro…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I was just listening to Ron’s theme song and I thought you and Sniper would enjoy it. XD

@theducktator

Lol, it’s still in the works. 😉

@the_lost-journal

those are funny. I just did my own because I was in the car and didn’t have access to my quote folder so I did some from my own book because I knew I wouldn’t accidentally misquote them. XD

@ellette-giselle

Two of my characters:

(MC guy just did something to save MC girl- his new bride- and it was super dangerous.)

girl: “ I don’t know if I want to kiss you or shove you off the bridge right now.”

Guy: “can I pick?”

I want to read that!

😈😈😈

Picture is pretty much finished. Will post tomorrow…

@hybridlore

lol. Maybe.

Glad it was helpful!

@hybridlore

Lovely. You disabled copy and paste on the doc. Now I have to do it all the hard way. XD

Okay, feedback answers.

OVERALL

What was your overall impression of the story?

Not sure entirely what you are looking for, but I walked away feeling really excited for the next book and also really refreshed as this is one of my…[Read more]

@koshka

Aw thanks!!!

Would you agree, @power ?

Any suggestions. (besides the odd shapes near his neckline…. which was a reminder for me to clean it up with a brush but I forgot until just now.) and the couple typos already mentioned?

@rae That sounds cool!

@ellette-giselle I don’t know. Either way could work.

@keilah-h

Possibly, or it could be a different insignia altogether depending on the Sector. I;’m not sure yet. What do you think?

Thank you for the cover suggestions!!!!!

Yes, I found a few typos! Whoops, you found one I didn’t.

Good thing you looked. XD

Oh, never mind, you found the typo.

Other than that, the cover looks beautiful.

Also, I have a few suggestions for the back blurb.

• You accidentally wrote “These children are forbidden to form any emotional that might hinder their unwavering loyalty.” Should it be “emotional bond” instead?
• “Jonathan, the second-born” should maybe be something like “Jonathan, a second-born.” But that one can stay in if you really want…

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