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@ellette-giselle

Here’s an alternate version I just edited. I didn’t remove all hints, but I tried to make it less explicit–still not sure which version I’ll eventually go with, though.

When a classmate invites her to an underground church meeting, Sara starts to wonder if she’s been missing something all along–or Someone. But her twin bro…[Read more]

@keilah-h

That does make it easier! I’m pretty sure I have them all… though it’s been a while since I actually saw them. I don’t even know if I’ve come across the warden or armadillos, but I haven’t played in a while. Maybe I’ll check it out!

@keilah-h

Wow, that sounds like a cool seed! I don’t know if it would work for Xbox though… the editions kind of confuse me. 😅

@stephie

That’s hilarious 😂

@ellette-giselle

Gotcha. That definitely makes sense. I’ll see what I can do!

@ellette-giselle

Aw, thanks!! 😊 Yeah, I think maybe all of them came from you. Thanks for that, by the way! 😁

@ellette-giselle

Wow. *round of applause* You wrote all these? That’s insane.

I’m getting what you mean now, and I have a couple ideas. Your suggestions were super, super helpful. I’ll try to look at them later on my computer and adjust the main blurb.

One thing, though— I noticed that in most of your examples (the last one hints at it) you poi…[Read more]

@theshadow

Do you have thoughts on the blurb? Ellette mentioned she would prefer for it to share less about the overall plot.

@theshadow

Thank you soo much!! 🥰 I’m so glad people seem to like it already. The next chapter is where it starts to get interesting. I’ll maybe be posting that tomorrow, we’ll see.

@theshadow

Awesome, thanks! Hey, annoying characters makes this more interesting 😂

Cole Bauer

I know I’ve already shared these before, but here are the character moodboards in case anyone wants to see them!

Sara Bauer

@raxforge

Awesome!! I think the first one is… *checks* Chapter 7. So only a few more to go.

@the_lost-journal

Short stories??

Can I change my vote? Just the middle one, from Q to L. I reread it so I could tell you which were my favorite and realized I wanted to vote for Edgar instead.

I like Blaze too. Maybe Robert, and Beatrice? And then I don’t like Edgar, Katerina, Josephine, and Antin.

@ellette-giselle

Awww, I’m so glad you like it!!! That means so much to me 🥰🥰 Honestly. Thank you so much for reading it.

Welll….. 😅 I didn’t really know where I was going with it when I started, I just knew I had to start. I’ll probably keep it as like, the same scene, but I still need to rewrite parts of it. It’s also super short compared…[Read more]

@raxforge

I have a feeling you’ll enjoy some of the underground church chapters, or maybe be able to help me with some of what the pastor says.

@raxforge

Great, thanks!!

@esther-c

Oh boy, we’ve got the cold too! Yours sounds worse, though. I’ll be praying for y’all!

@the_lost-journal

I’m kind of a skimmer. 🫣

@theshadow

Yikes, that would be a chaotic kitchen 😅 D, Q, & Z.