hybridlore

@ellette-giselle

6 or 7!

@ellette-giselle

So, on the front cover, I agree that the title feels a little cramped. Maybe enlarge it a little and move your name to the bottom?

Also, I would remove the “By:” and just put your name. In my opinion, it feels more professional, but it’s up to you if you like that version more.

The cover illustration is beautiful!

On the back,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

It sounds really cool! Are you looking for format critiques, or is it too late for that?

@theducktator
I skim it in the beginning and then normally don’t go back to it…  Maybe once or twice, but not every time a place is mentioned. 😅

@savannah_grace2009

Great chapters! I love the way you described this

worry striking a searing flame in the pit of her stomach.

And I love Cassian and Lilitu’s relationship. 🥰

@ellette-giselle
Wow, it looks great!! Thank you so much!!!

@ellette-giselle

Wow, it looks awesome!

@ellette-giselle

Oh, wow, awesome! I didn’t know you could do that 😅. It sounds really interesting! Okay, I’ll let you know if I decide to!

What is it called?

@ellette-giselle

Congratulations on publishing your novel! Is it through Amazon, or what? What’s it about?

Okay, awesome! Thanks!

@whalekeeper

I LOVE it! Thank you so much!

Let’s try that again . . . @ellette-giselle

@ellette_giselle

If you’re not too busy, I would love a drawing of one of my characters! The same one I gave Whaley, Noa Montero. I can post her description here in a minute…

Also, I can’t remember if I introduced myself before… sorry if I haven’t. I’m hybridlore, a homeschooled soon-to-be-junior and I write YA science fiction. It’s nice to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Whoops, didn’t know if you wanted me to post all that stuff yet. Oh well 😅

@whalekeeper

Awesome! Those are cute, are they from your WIP?

Noa Montero

Curly dark hair, tan skin, and brown eyes. Seventeen years old. Wearing a navy long-sleeved shirt tucked into black cargo pants and black lace-up boots.

Noa is the ship’s assistant pilot and the protagonist. She’s been traveling on the Annora for years and has been fly…[Read more]

CONGRATS to @kyronthearcanin!!! She is now PUBLISHED!!!!!! 🎉🎊🎉🎊🎉🎉

@esther-c @acancello @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @freed_and_redeemed @rae @highscribeofaetherium @calyhuge @jonas @princesachronicles @thearcaneaxiom @trailblazer @everybody!

@savannah_grace2009

Just wanted to pop in and say I love how this is going! Cassian is a much better character imo now that I’ve seen him with Sef.

I know it’s super hard not to doubt yourself and your writing…. I think it’s just a writer thing. And it’s hard when it seems so easy for other people. But it doesn’t have to be perfect right now.…[Read more]