@hybridlore
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Wyoh strikes again 😣 I didn’t get tagged.
It was a necessary act of terrorism.
But… now how are we going to save Leon and Rolf? 😢😢
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
I already attempted to do so and got out-debated.Â
She took fake-Alec. 😖You don’t care about Leon?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@liberty *whispers* I think we’re just encouraging her. . . 👀😟
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
*wants to ask for another section, but is also concerned of what I might find in it*
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
I seem to recall it was you who invited me here. 🧐 XD
Poor fake Alec. At least fake Leon and Rolf get their freedom. 🤣
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Alec is halfway across the world, Ellette.Â
Actually they’re not even on the same planet, right?You can’t seriously believe that you’re holding him against the wall right now. That’s just some poor civilian, or maybe one of the bad guys, (in which case you can keep him there.)Just put the gun down, and no one’s going to get hur…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
This calls for a new squad! Not the protection squad, because if I did that you would try to steal my characters.
The CHARACTER WITNESS PROTECTION!!!
*promptly rescues Leon and Rolf, gives them new identities so they can hide from you and they disappear into the city*
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Yay, Godly! So glad you’re back! 😁
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Yikes. This is not looking good.
So Hassan paid the soldiers to look the other way?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Wow. That escalated quickly!
Seems like things are about to get rough for Leon and Rolf… 🥺
Why wouldn’t the slave trader just kill them instead of tying them up and everything?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Uh oh, it doesn’t look like it’s working again. But yay, thanks! I’ll check it out!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Okay, good. Eh, it’s just part of his personality to me. He’s great at Warrain and leading the team, because he applies himself, and as a result doesn’t really focus on school. 😆 His skills with computers and coding will be more prominent later.
Yep! Though Sara and Cole will still carry most of the story. I believe Alec’s next ch…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Is he meant to be really smart, but doesn’t necessarily care about school?
You nailed it! Is that enough description, or do you want me to try to elaborate? 😜 And don’t worry, you’re good.
Awesome, thank you! Yeah, Alec is one of my favorites. 🥰
By the way, are you planning to post a new chapter of your WIP soon? I’m looking forward…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Oh, definitely. I was just curious about the rights of Canada’s government compared to ours. They seem to be very close.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Yeah… 😅
That’s really interesting. Crazy to realize that this really isn’t too far off from what is happening in real life today.
In Canada, do you have the same guaranteed rights as in the US’s Constitution? I’m assuming it’s very similar. Freedom of assembly, freedom of speech, freedom of religion, etc.?
Oh yeah, there…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Awesome, thank you!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Yeah… 😝 Oopsy. Not to mention, the end of Chapter 13 kind of makes it seem like he’s unsure about what he does.Â
Which maybe he is. I have to solidify his arc soon xD.Hey, that is the best way to write. Keep at it!
I’ll try! 🫡
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Well, I’m glad it comes through! I don’t even know what I’m doing… I just pray and try to picture it.
Okay, good. I was trying to put foreshadowing and hints in the chapters before so that it’d all make sense, but since the story was still forming at some stages (Chapter 4, I think, the one where Alec comes home for dinner, n…[Read more]
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