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@ellette-giselle

Wow. That escalated quickly!

Seems like things are about to get rough for Leon and Rolf… 🥺

Why wouldn’t the slave trader just kill them instead of tying them up and everything?

@ellette-giselle

Uh oh, it doesn’t look like it’s working again. But yay, thanks! I’ll check it out!

@theshadow

Okay, good. Eh, it’s just part of his personality to me. He’s great at Warrain and leading the team, because he applies himself, and as a result doesn’t really focus on school. 😆 His skills with computers and coding will be more prominent later.

Yep! Though Sara and Cole will still carry most of the story. I believe Alec’s next ch…[Read more]

@theshadow

Is he meant to be really smart, but doesn’t necessarily care about school?

You nailed it! Is that enough description, or do you want me to try to elaborate? 😜 And don’t worry, you’re good.

Awesome, thank you! Yeah, Alec is one of my favorites. 🥰

By the way, are you planning to post a new chapter of your WIP soon? I’m looking forward…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Oh, definitely. I was just curious about the rights of Canada’s government compared to ours. They seem to be very close.

@linus-smallprint

Yeah… 😅

That’s really interesting. Crazy to realize that this really isn’t too far off from what is happening in real life today.

In Canada, do you have the same guaranteed rights as in the US’s Constitution? I’m assuming it’s very similar. Freedom of assembly, freedom of speech, freedom of religion, etc.?

Oh yeah, there…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Awesome, thank you!

@ellette-giselle

Yeah… 😝 Oopsy. Not to mention, the end of Chapter 13 kind of makes it seem like he’s unsure about what he does. Which maybe he is. I have to solidify his arc soon xD.

Hey, that is the best way to write. Keep at it!

I’ll try! 🫡

@ellette-giselle

Well, I’m glad it comes through! I don’t even know what I’m doing… I just pray and try to picture it.

Okay, good. I was trying to put foreshadowing and hints in the chapters before so that it’d all make sense, but since the story was still forming at some stages (Chapter 4, I think, the one where Alec comes home for dinner, n…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Aw, Ellette, I don’t even really know what to say. I’m so, so glad you like it! Thank you for all the encouragement!

I want this made into a MOVIE!!

Every author’s not-so-secret dream xD

Yeah, poor Everett. It’d be a challenge for sure.

So… was it obvious before this chapter what Alec did for his job? Do you feel like you have…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Of course!! 🥰 I’m glad it’s all coming together so quickly!

Yep xD No problem.

Aw, so glad I could help! 💕💕

@savannah_grace2009

It looks great, Sara! I didn’t read the sixth story, but I enjoyed the other new ones. The order seemed to work pretty well, and I thought it was great that you added an introduction to explain the stories before jumping in. Just one note–the afterword was spelled “afterward” in the doc. Otherwise, I don’t really have any big…[Read more]

@raxforge

Yeah, it hasn’t been working right for a few days now. But without Kathleen around to fix it, I’m not sure if it will get better. 😕

@ellette-giselle

KP is breaking on my phone. I got emailed for that but when I clicked on it, it did not show your post. Now I’m on my laptop, and somehow it shows it now. 🤔

“What? What did I do?” *in very innocent voice.*

Only killed off at least four pretty important characters in only two books. (Prince guy, Turin, Aaron, Adrian.) Nearly kill…[Read more]

@theshadow

It just sounds so much better than “looked”. XD

@shadow @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @theducktator @savannah-grace2009 @sorry-if-i-forgot-anyone-😢

Next two chapters! 😆 I’m fairly pleased with these. Chapter 13 (Alec’s first POV!) may need to be extended a bit, but it certainly ups the stakes a bit. At…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Happy late birthday!!!!!!!! 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

@ellette-giselle

I’m shaking my head at you right now.

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, sometimes it looks different and the entire website doesn’t load, but it still works usually.

You 100% are!!

Nice. 😎

I feel like I’ve had a tone of those scenes though.

Yeah, good point. Maybe add something in their journal entries about how it went well, and how Leon is proud of Julian? Something like that.

You have no ide…

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@ellette-giselle

I got tagged for both of these, so I’m assuming it’s working again for the most part.

since no one has been replying to this except for Hybridlore,

I’m just your #1 fan 😉 Well, online fan anyway.

Good section. I was right about them meeting the boy again, but wrong about him coming with them. Oh well.

When did Leon start calli…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Probably not, I guess I just missed that.