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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Vulkasin
The foxlike creature squeaked and seemed to cock his head at Zlatan.
Lyn laughed “Don’t be silly, darling.” She pecked it on the ear at which the thing tucked it’s head into it’s paws and chirped.
“Zees is Nyx, you say?” Vulkasin ran his fingers through his grey-blonde hair and replaced his helmet. “He looks like a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Nevermind, it’s gone.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Oops! That was only part, do you want me to go ahead and add the rest?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Vulkasin and Zlatan
His brother’s face looked to be stone, the expression which meant he wasn’t comfortable, although he had returned his blade to it’s scabbard.
Vulkasin laughed. He couldn’t help it really. Not with Zlatan acting a complete Desanik beside him (Military officer similar to a sergeant). At first he tried to…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Zlatan and Vulkasin
They stared at him each in a different version of confusion.
He must not have explained something. “Which passage do you think-”
A door a little farther down one corridor flew open with a bang and a bright flash shot out, landing before them. “I have arrived!” A cheery voice announced.
There stood a girl, her smile…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Yes! XD I think they figured that out pretty quick.
This next one would probably be a good place for them to meet up with someone, whether Sofia or Lyn and Nyx.
Vulkasin and Zlatan
November stared at the strip in his hands with something approaching horror.
Zlatan didn’t notice.
Vulkasin desperately tried not to laugh,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
That’s such a perfect description of Vulkasin! (And their marching rations, hahaha)
Now for my part…
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Zlatan and Vulkasin
At the mention of food the lad’s eyes nearly doubled in size and Ara’s laugh sounded alongside a soft rumble. She smiled at Novembré. “I’m honestly not sure.”
Why didn’t I think of this? Zlatan glanced down the Corridor to the last light slit they had passed. Darkness. How long had it been?
Novembré had turned red again,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic I need help, please! in the forum Plotting 4 years, 3 months ago
Yes! (Why is it so hard to find the right words sometimes?) I shall store that phrasing up for next time. Thank you! =)
Oo, your books sounds good!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
I don’t believe so, and I should know as this is the ONE book I’ve actually managed to plot.
Well, that poem popped into my head. In truth my story isn’t even similar, at least as far as I know.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Vulkasin and Zlatan
Vulkasin watched his brother standing still in the corridor, his head cocked, listening, as if trying to tell were the blast had come from.
Nowhere near. But a moment later there was something else, something at the edge of his hearing, teasing him. Vulkasin shook his head, it must just be some ringing in his…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Just going to make this clear, ZLATAN DOESN’T DIE!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Because…
It’s a story the Maker has always told
And the story, my child, is true.
(Armulyn, Royal Bard of the Shining Isle From chapter 96, “The Former Fangs Have Passed Away.”)
*Weeps*
That’s why I love this character.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
HI!! *Returns hugs and hands you a chocolate eclair* Aww, thank you, I’ll tell them!
Oh Zlatan, you golden heart. Each of those lashes paid for a child you set free. You knew the price for what you did, but didn’t know it was already paid for you.
Uh, anyway…
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Koshka replied to the topic I need help, please! in the forum Plotting 4 years, 3 months ago
Its awesome!
Ah, that sounds good.
(You may ask, but I won’t tell!) Hmm, similar thing happened to me, but I didn’t read it, I had most of the plotline explained to me by a darling sibling. =|Although I most likely wouldn’t have read it untill I understood the series; I
maybe a bit picky.Oh dear. I just read over how I rephrased my…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Zlatan and Vulkasin
Ara rose and dusted off her skirt. She seemed to have recovered. “We don’t want to be any trouble.”
Zlatan sighed. “If zees Corvina is bad enough her presence brings dreams in daylight (he is actually referring to PTSD), it looks like she’s already trouble.”
His brother laughed from where he leaned against…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
I’m fine with that! I’m working on the next scene at the moment, sorry about the delay. Life goes on.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Aww, he’s cute! I wuv wittle fuzzy fings.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Here’s a list I made to keep track (definitely not weird)
Protagonist Antagonist
@emilysf =Zoe and Sofia
@godlyfantasy12 =November, Ara, Lyn, Nyx, and Corvina
@elishavet-pidyon =Viktor and Ocran
@koshka =Zlatan and Vulkasin
@denali-christianson = Kilied and Balorico
If I lost someone please correct me!
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