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@godlyfantasy12

That’s such a perfect description of Vulkasin! (And their marching rations, hahaha)

Now for my part…

Zlatan and Vulkasin

At the mention of food the lad’s eyes nearly doubled in size and Ara’s laugh sounded alongside a soft rumble. She smiled at Novembré. “I’m honestly not sure.”

Why didn’t I think of this? Zlatan glanced down the Corridor to the last light slit they had passed. Darkness. How long had  it been?

Novembré had turned red again,…[Read more]

@emilysf

Yes! (Why is it so hard to find the right words sometimes?) I shall store that phrasing up for next time. Thank you! =)

Oo, your books sounds good!

@godlyfantasy12

I don’t believe so, and I should know as this is the ONE book I’ve actually managed to plot.

Well, that poem popped into my head. In truth my story isn’t even similar, at least as far as I know.

@godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin and Zlatan

Vulkasin watched his brother standing still in the corridor, his head cocked, listening, as if trying to tell were the blast had come from.

Nowhere near. But a moment later there was something else, something at the edge of his hearing, teasing him. Vulkasin shook his head, it must just be some ringing in his…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Just going to make this clear, ZLATAN DOESN’T DIE!

@godlyfantasy12

Because…

It’s a story the Maker has always told

And the story, my child, is true.

(Armulyn, Royal Bard of the Shining Isle From chapter 96, “The Former Fangs Have Passed Away.”)

*Weeps*

That’s why I love this character.

@godlyfantasy12

HI!! *Returns hugs and hands you a chocolate eclair* Aww, thank you, I’ll tell them!

Oh Zlatan, you golden heart. Each of those lashes paid for a child you set free. You knew the price for what you did, but didn’t know it was already paid for you.

Uh, anyway…

@emilysf

Its awesome!

Ah, that sounds good.

(You may ask, but I won’t tell!) Hmm, similar thing happened to me, but I didn’t read it, I had most of the plotline explained to me by a darling sibling. =|Although I most likely wouldn’t have read it untill I understood the series; I may be a bit picky.

Oh dear. I just read over how I rephrased my…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Zlatan and Vulkasin

Ara rose and dusted off her skirt. She seemed to have recovered. “We don’t want to be any trouble.”

Zlatan sighed. “If zees Corvina is bad enough her presence brings dreams in daylight (he is actually referring to PTSD), it looks like she’s already trouble.”

His brother laughed from where he leaned against…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf

I’m fine with that! I’m working on the next scene at the moment, sorry about the delay. Life goes on.

@godlyfantasy12

Aww, he’s cute! I wuv wittle fuzzy fings.

Here’s a list I made to keep track (definitely not weird)

Protagonist Antagonist

@emilysf =Zoe and Sofia

@godlyfantasy12 =November, Ara, Lyn, Nyx, and Corvina

@elishavet-pidyon =Viktor and Ocran

@koshka =Zlatan and Vulkasin

@denali-christianson = Kilied and Balorico

If I lost someone please correct me!

@emilysf

By the way, I just realized what your profile picture says. XD

That could make sense. I would have this as hammered down as possible before the death scene of course. 😉

If you do ever read the Wingfeather Saga, some of this may clear up. But if you do, enjoy the series, don’t just read it for writing purposes. =) (I will especially…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

By the way, whoever I mention first is the actual point of view for a section.

Vulkasin and Zlatan.

Door after door brought nothing in reward, and by the second corridor Vulkasin was sure they were headed higher into the castle, not down to some courtyard.

He was about to suggest they turn around when Ara’s…[Read more]

It is interesting though, Zlatan’s story is set up a little different as although there is a ‘villian’ who initiates most of his problems, Zlatan is his own antagonist.

His name btw, means ‘Golden one’.

@godlyfantasy12

Aw, poor girl. That does sound like a good plot point.

Do I do that? Nah, only have major ‘what is truth?’ and ‘what have I done?’ issues planned for my MCs, so nothing overly tramatic. XD

@godlyfantasy12

I noticed those color combinations had some sort of effect on her. The puzzle pieces are clicking.

@godlyfantasy12

And cheers for skirt-girls!(being one myself) I’m relishing that.

@godlyfantasy12

She’s great!

Oohh, so that’s why Ara was so flumuxed by Zlatan’s black hair. Hmmm, many those two should meet. Zlatan with charcoal black hair, golden eyes, and a mildly-pessimistic-yet-somehow-idealistic nature, and your dear antagonist Corvina whith her whole set of problems. Especially if Elishavet’s villian gets in too.

This…[Read more]