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BlueJay replied to the topic Other Picture Prompt Entries in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Can someone post the picture that prompted Kate, Faith and Ingrid to write their stories? It must have been before I joined up and I’m dying to see it. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
It’s hard isn’t it? I keeping thinking of the old story line. And my old characters too. But my main person wasn’t very main in my first one, so I thought I’d try it again and make him stand out.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@kate-flournoy 388. I’m trying to rewrite Bondage and fix that up. I’m completely redoing it. And making sure of who my main character is. Slow process.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
I’m jumping on too. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Other Picture Prompt Entries in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@gretald The suspense is killing me too. Cause I don’t know what happens!!! XD
Yes @kate-flournoy I took a bit to decide, but I can only see two ends, so I chose to do swords. 😀 -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Haha, we were posting at the same time. Yes, it’s really good. We should do it again tomorrow, around the same time. (Actually I won’t be able to do it in the morning, {for me} maybe the afternoon {for me})
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@daeus How did you go? Believe it or not I finished a first draft on a new short story. I’ve called it ‘A Ticking Bomb.’ It will be interesting to see what the rest of my family (mainly my mum who is my editor) think of it. It was fun to do though. 🙂
It’s kind of weird to think that two people who have never met and live on opposite sides of the…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@daeus me too. Good luck! 😛
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@daeus. YES! We made contact. Yeah I can do that. (Which story should I work on???) 😀 This is going to be interesting. Three minutes to go….two minutes to go…..
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BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
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BlueJay replied to the topic Other Picture Prompt Entries in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
The fog drifted silently through the trees creating ghostly objects. The rider sat motionless, only his moving eyes revealed that he was alive. Every now and then his horse shook its mane and the jingle of the metal parts of its bridle resounded in the silence. Suddenly the horse jerked up its big head. The crunch of snow under heavy feet could be…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Anna's Savanna by BlueJay in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
Yep that would work. I could even mention a check list here. Thank you. 😀 😉 And “check” would work.
So glad you enjoyed it. It is definitely one of my favourites. 😀 -
BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
Thank you all. I have pretty much figured out what to do. Do you think that (based upon Disney Aladdin) would they have had stalls/shops like that in Noah’s day? I have no idea how to find out. What are your views?
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
I’m available if anyone wants to write with me? @anna-brie, @daeus, @lightningmouse
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
I could do it tomorrow anywhere from 1:30-3:30 pm EST.
@daeus We will still be asleep then, if I have figured this out right. Your 1:00pm will be our 4:00am. I know, we sleep sooooo late. 😀 So I guess for us Aussies, we’ll just have to play it be ear and see if anyone is awake when we are. (*Bother different time zones*)
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Oh and one other thing, when you post something, look at the time. That is American not ours. See my last post was 10:25pm yet it is 1:26pm our time.
@daeus, I don’t know how you’re still awake?!? I so need sleep. (I love sleeping in… 🙂 ) -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@anna-brie How about we start at 2:00pm (aus) 😛
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
No problem at all. We can try tomorrow. (Sleep well tonight. 😀 )
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BlueJay replied to the topic Anna's Savanna by BlueJay in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@aratrea If you have the time, I’ve love your feedback with the rest of the story. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Battle Power in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 1 month ago
This just keeps making me think of Prince Caspian and the underground fight. That scene is done so well, with Caspian and Peter counting. Maybe there is something there that will help.
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