Little Brown Dog

Thank You! That is very helpful:)

She’s almost the MC, her adoptive parents are the MCs though. I’m thinking it’ll be mostly short term memory loss.

Thank you so much for your helpfulness:)!

I think this scene was a bit Omniscient. Stephen and Raine are my MCs, and Rowan is a supporting so i was trying to have him in the scene, but it be focused on Stephen and Raine.

Thank you!:)

OK. I will do it. I will do the elf thing:)

xP Oh no worries, i don’t remember how old i am, i didn’t bother to keep track after I left my last parallel universe.

I’m thinking that if we ever reached a point where torture guaranteed accurate results, it might be permissible sometimes… This comes from a very long train of thought that won’t translate through my telepathic keyboard…

An argument i’ve often seen used is that Is one person’s life and dignity worth the same as a 100 peoples’ lives? As a writer, I’m often inclined to say that 100 people are worth more, but then when using torture there’s the problem of lying. So it really is a super complex questionXP Because what is going to stop the theoretical terrorist from…[Read more]

Ezra, i just want to say, you remind me of my 15yo brother. That is something he would do

You know you’re a writer when your laptop consists of an overloaded Microsoft Word, movie soundtracks and a weathered keyboard.

Yes… I killed my laptop this summer with so many story ideas…. I still haven’t got a new one!

Oh I AM ACTUALLY GOING TO DO THE COSTUME THING GUYS! I HAVE AN AWESOME ELF COSTUME I ASSEMBLED AND I WANT TO WEAR IT OUT TO TOWN!!!! WHO THINK I SHOULD???

Thank y’all for your warm greetings!

@rolena, My mare is Cynnamon Spyce, after her dear mother Sugar and Spice, who was my first lesson horse, but sadly passed away shortly after the birth of her baby. My wonderful parents:) bought her baby for me though from the riding school. I’ve owned her since she was 6mths old.

Glad to meet you as well Natalee Jensen! My Writing Assistant is still insisting i introduce myself as the Little Brown Dog, and she offers her paw in a greeting hand-shake.

Ok, gracis:)

Can i post like a excerpt on the forum for people to give feedback on? Sorry, I’m new to KP:)

No… But i kinda want one… Even if it’s only to keep me interestedxP

Thank you @natalee! I’m fighting very hard to meet my daily word countxP at about 590 for the day so far…..

It’s /hopefully/ going to be a series. the series title is Rising Phoenix. The first book is Never Give Up Hope

ok thank you @hope . The problem sort of arose because he originally had one character arc where he became a traitor, but then his author (me of course :P) changed it and he eventually became a more likable character. But the event of his interrogation of Piper was a bit of a catalyst for some of the plot and the character arcs…

Oh dear, I do believe i have frightened everybody off… xP