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Little Brown Dog replied to the topic Inter-genre Island in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 11 months ago
Ash: *hangs down from the tree and grins* Hey there. *She’s dressed in 1600’s clothing with a black hood and cape* // Cephas: *perched on the branch and chitters softly*
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Little Brown Dog replied to the topic Scene Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 11 months ago
Oh dear, i didn’t mean to set off a huge thing like this, but it would appear that Shifters are a touchy subject. I like your idea @daeus telling the creation story would be great! Do you think it would work better in the story though? Like one character explaining to another?
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Little Brown Dog replied to the topic Inter-genre Island in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 11 months ago
Ash: *watches the others from a tree top, shaking her head.* I’m sure we’ll be better off alone, Cephas. *to her pet dragon*
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Little Brown Dog replied to the topic Character Café in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 11 months ago
Ash: *ended up on the island after stealing an enchanted book and happening to open it and start reading* *looks around* Great…. Where on earth are we, Cephas? // Cephas: *chitters in confusion*
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Little Brown Dog replied to the topic Character Café in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 11 months ago
Ok sounds good! The rest can be figured out as we go!:)
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Little Brown Dog replied to the topic Character Café in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 11 months ago
Ok, my charrie is Ashe, 14yo thief. She’s just-above-normal height and rather thin, with jet-black hair and almost-black eyes. She has a pet fairy dragon named Cephas, who she can speak to. She’s quiet like you would expect a thief to be, but very defensive and can pretend to be a lot of things, but if you can manage to make friends with her,…[Read more]
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Little Brown Dog replied to the topic Character Café in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 11 months ago
I’m in!!! I love these!!!:)
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Little Brown Dog replied to the topic Scene Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 11 months ago
Thank you for y’all input! @Daeus i was trying to figure out a new name for them and came up with Lupines, but i think i found that was already taken. Also, my Were’s don’t have what they call “Moon sickness” which in the story is the result of a were turning evil and thus losing control of their wolf/cat abilities. They refuse to take human life…[Read more]
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Little Brown Dog replied to the topic Scene Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 11 months ago
@Sarah Hoven, my were’s are in the story granted their powers by God in order to fight demons and other evils that manage to invade the real world.
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Little Brown Dog replied to the topic Scene Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 11 months ago
Ok thank you:) Yeah, i was kind of rushing when writing this.
I often have trouble with description, do you have any tips?
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Little Brown Dog started the topic Scene Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 11 months ago
hey guys! mind taking a look at this scene and telling me what you think? Thank y’all!!
:Else where, another wolf was also under going surgery. Sturm. Her face was half covered by a mask and her body was underneath surgical drapes. Several doctors came and went as they worked to stitch the last bits of Stürm’s torn skin together. Near the do…[Read more]
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Little Brown Dog replied to the topic The Sign of the Prancing Poodle in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 11 months ago
Sign of the Falling Dragon
Inn of the Black Unicorn
Wild Mare Inn
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Little Brown Dog replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 11 months ago
Yes… @Kate that is a one…
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Little Brown Dog replied to the topic Experiment: Costume in Public in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 11 months ago
Yeah;P
oh, and my costume consists of; a gold crown with leaf decals, silver eyeliner, a forest green velvet cloak, brown tunic, string belt and leg armor pieces that i hot-glued to pair of black knee high boots. -
Little Brown Dog replied to the topic Experiment: Costume in Public in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 11 months ago
Fun! 😛 WE live in the country too:)
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Little Brown Dog replied to the topic Bad heroes, messed up protagonists, and character arcs in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 11 months ago
Ok, I am already sympathizing with dearest Walter! I have a soft spot for hurting heroes or villains for that matter.
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Little Brown Dog started the topic Experiment: Costume in Public in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 11 months ago
Ok, I did the Elf thing. I wore my costume in the grocery store. Here’s my results,
Adults: They /very/ /very/ rarely pay at attention to costumes. I got two double takes in 2 hours. /two/. and it was crowded.
Children: They either gawk in awe or look confused. Often the parents lead them away as they stare.
So that the result of the Elf thing! xP
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Little Brown Dog replied to the topic Sickly Characters? in the forum Characters 10 years, 11 months ago
Hmmm. yeah! @hope ! She’s the oldest of 6 i think… but she was the only child for a while (before her adoptive dad got married and she became a big sister suddenlyxP) and her main quirk is she’s very possessive of her daddy, a bit immature and she loves to climb and stuffxP
@Ivy in this story, the MCs’ family is mostly adopted. They only have…[Read more]
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Little Brown Dog replied to the topic It Began Long Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 11 months ago
Oh… xP I have one. This is very sad, but i was in love with the second story i wrote and convinced by dad to self-publish it for me on the kindle. he did. don’t ever read it. I will die.
But my first story i remember was a story about these kids who could travel to this other world and stuff. like Narnia. Like the rest of you guys though, i…[Read more]
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