Hobbitchild

@seekjustice,

I just can’t figure out how to add them in without making it annoying to read, like its forced. I’m also trying to add more world building (because Tolkien is my favorite author and I want to slightly resemble that) so its being difficult

@catwing,

Hey! how’s it going? how’s your year been?

@seekjustice,

I am trying to fill in holes and missing information and skipped scenes (my first draft is literally just the main plot and that’s it, nothing else), but I can’t seem to figure out how to do so

@seekjustice

you won’t be disappointed 🙂

I am having the hardest time getting motivation for my second draft for Decisions

@seekjustice

They are so well done. The author does so much research to make them historically and culturally accurate as well as biblically accurate.

Ooooooh, this has me intrigued. The half-elf is already my favorite character.

I love sibling duos! They are under utilized in stories

@seekjustice

I highly recommend her. My favorite one (Bread of Angels) is about Lydia, the maker of purple in the book of Acts that Paul mentions. I’m currently read Daughter of Rome, which is about Aquila and Pricilla. Its really good too. She mostly writes about women in the Bible, but sometimes she takes a story of the Bible and creates a…[Read more]

@seekjustice,

I’ve been doing alright. Been reading a lot of books by Tessa Afshar, a biblical fiction writer, but been painfully neglecting my writing. How about you?

@seekjustice,

How have you been doing?

@seekjustice, you still around?

@rochellaine

I’m glad we got to talk a little bit! Happy New Year

@rochellaine, Yes! we definitely need to do that. I’ll be at Liberty in Lynchburg studying nursing with a focus on missions (which is why I picked Liberty, because that had the missions built into one of their nursing programs)

How exciting! Being an aunt is my favorite thing right now, I love it so much. It’s nice that they’re so close to…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Hey! I’ve been a little bit busy getting ready to head to Virginia in about 2 weeks for school, but overall well. How about you? How’s everything going for you?

They’ve been great! My oldest sister, her husband, and their baby are visiting until the 5th so my family has been greatly enjoying spending time with them. How about for you?

@seekjustice, @rochellaine, @godlyfantasy12, @jenwriter17,

I’m here now!

leaving for about an hour

@jenwriter17, I would never take a long time to respond…heh heh heh

I’m glad you got some good feedback

Sadly no, though I have discovered that there is an Ever After musical, so I might hunt down that soundtrack sometime soon. Currently I am still obsessed with Newsies and The Clockmaker’s Daughter. How about you?

@gracie-j well just tag me…[Read more]

(fyi for anyone, I will be writing off and on all day)

@jenwriter17, Cool! Editing is soooo much fun on a tight schedule. You had a professional editor look at it, right?

Thank you! I have both the 1st and 2nd draft open at once, and I realized that already the 2nd draft has a much darker, but more plot appropriate tone to it