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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@rochellaine I see.
They did prayer shawls back then. They’re basically shawls that women wore on their head when they prayed. I think they have tassels on the ends and something in hebrew in a corner. You may have to look it up, because my info right now is spotty (it’s been a while). But now you know about them. -
Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@rochellaine you’re welcome.
I know some about Hebrew culture so hopefully I can spot something if you mess up. 😉
Do you know about prayer shawls, the special stick they use to keep their place while reading the Bible (I can’t remember what it’s called right now), or what Shalom means? I can tell you a little bit if you don’t and want to.
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@dekreel You should. 😉
I’m not beta-reading @seekjustice book. I am waiting for her to send it out. Waiting. 🙂 (But I’m working my book some. ;P )
I got distracted and decided to take a summer break. I can’t remember if it was the short story contest at my library or the 4th of July parade that distracted me… Also I’m thinking about getting…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@dekreel It’s been so long! What’re you doing?
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@valtmy
Ah… I see. Maybe one day you can fix it. Perhaps even read it (Unless it’s a real world fantasy, I don’t like those if they have (good/fantasy) magic. Real world fantasy irritates me anyway. If it’s good magic in another dimension to me it’s just how that dimension works and I’m mostly fine with that. Unless it’s not a good/working magic…[Read more] -
Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@valtmy
Yep! It’s fun. Not too much Sci-fi until the next book with a new character… Poor tortured character we will have fun. 😉 Some people don’t like fantasy as much. It’s fine.I have to trust Him… Sometimes I have to wait, others I need to remember to ask, and then there’s the times when it is plopped in my lap. Like when he says a…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@valtmy Hi. I don’t think I ever told you. ;P
Working Series name: Three and Seven
Book name: Finding Secrets
Six friends find out they are part of the Seven and end up looking for three jewels (they do something. I’m hoping I will figure out or God will tell me before I get to the last book. XP *nervous laughter*). There’s a girl with who wears…[Read more] -
Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice @valtmy @alia I’m here.
@rochellaine I could maybe read it tomorrow some. It sounds very interesting. -
Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@rochellaine Chicken wire doesn’t sound like something that would keep them in. We’ll see if they ever do. 😉
@seekjustice @valtmy Good night! I got a small bit done, but it is done so that’s good.
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@rochellaine This is the first time. 😀 Night number two. No attempted escapes. ;P (Only just now from you… They have and closed off barn thing, inside of a fenced off area, inside of an electric fence. And they wanted to sleep. 😉 )
Indeed. *grins*
So far so fun. XP
@valtmy Noon aka midnight. ;D
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@rochellaine I had to go help with goats and then came back. Then I had to wash dishes and now I’m back. I think right now its just life. But being cheshire is helpful for that. ;P
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice What are you doing?
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice @valtmy Hello!
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@valtmy I understand. 😉
@rochellaine @seekjustice I’m back. Today has been a long (but fun) day outside watching the goats. 😀
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice I will return after the goats are put away… Give me a while.
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 It’s just part, but yay! Now I have to rewrite entire chapters and add some action. *nods* My book needs more action toward the beginning.
Thanks!@rochellaine @seekjustice @valtmy @dekreel I’ll be doing some writing/rewriting in a few minutes. So I’m here. 🙂
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@Rochellaine Also the dwarves brought him to the coffin right?
@seekjustice I can make more points tomorrow.
@jenwriter17 @valtmy @alia I am going to sleep. Good night. I finished this edit stage! *throws feathers* Rewriting tomorrow. ^.^
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@alia How could I forget Snow White? But I can’t remember her encounter with the prince…
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@Alia I got as far as him taking them flying and them being terribly hungry and he would wander off literally forgetting they existed. It was ruining the movie for me.
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
As I recall…
Not love at first sight ~ Belle(Beauty and the Beast [old and new]), Rapunzel, Jasmine? (Aladdin. But he may have loved her at first sight I think), Anna (Frozen), Giselle (Enchanted),
Love at first sight ~ Cinderella, Ariel (Little Mermaid),
I don’t remember… Aurora (Sleeping Beauty),
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