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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Basically, there are nine characters so far (GRCR just listed them) who somehow ended up in this mysterious house that locked them inside and made them participate in a masquerade ball. Now the house has been mysteriously teleported to a different dimension, and they’re going to end up going on some sort of journey.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Thanks. I’ll try doing my first mood board. **Me getting a sinking feeling that I’m going to fail**
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009
What are y’all’s thoughts on my depiction of Thing?

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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
I that’s how I did it actually now checking the original document:
You’re telling me. I had more questions, but held my tongue because Thing’s current track record hasn’t been the most helpful for answering them, other than explaining my inability to eat.
Thanks Jonas for explaining what made sense in my head, but c…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
@thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium
Okay, so I think the problem is that those sentences are supposed to be his thoughts, but since we’re in first-person narration, we’re already inside his head. The difference is that those are things he was thinking then as opposed to now when he’s narrating the story.
I’m not sure if there’s a goo…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Okay, that’s kind of what I was thinking. I don’t know if it needs to be clearer or not. I don’t know how many other people would notice, and I already had a guess as to why. So maybe rewording it slightly would clear things up.
Ok, fair enough, I’ll tweak it then.
If you’re attached to it, I don’t think it needs to change at any point. It…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
I think those are the results of this being first-person. Using italics would actually be kind of weird, so you might have to actually write ‘I thought’ for each one.
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hybridlore posted an update 3 years ago
Hey guys! Are my posts showing up for y’all? When I go to the topic page, I see them, but they don’t show up in recent topics :/
@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @grcr @euodia-vision @acancello @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @anyoneelse -
TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
@hybridlore @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @kyronthearcanin @savannah_grace2009 @kathleenramm @spinner4him @lightoverdarkness6
(Uhhh, has anyone noticed that @sarafini has vanished? All her past posts say anonymous now… Did she just leave?)
Ok, here’s the third chapter! It may be the last I post of it for a while if at all, but we’ll…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years ago
Thanks!!
Yeah Hobie’s my favorite so he probably unintentionally influenced the drawing a bit. I love your Bucky drawing! White on black paper always looks so cool.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years ago
Thank you!
I just realized the light was glaring making it look blurry, it actually looks a little more detailed on the face in person XD
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years ago
@whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @anyone (y’all can ignore these tags if you want)
This is a full Rina drawing I’ve been working on for a while.

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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Thank you for explaining 😅 I’m not a science person, so I don’t have a good grasp on all that stuff. Thanks.
That’s alright, lol! This is very helpful actually, because I need to know how much my readers know, so I can explain things properly, and not annoy them with too much explanation at the same time.
I don’t find her t…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Overview of my main WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
New drawings of the swords. ^^^
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Sorry, I’ve been offline for the past day or two.
Both look cool, but I like the second better. The first one was your profile pic before right? Maybe it goes against the design, but some color might help? You could just tint the gray parts blue or some other color.
Yeah, it was my profile picture for a while, it’s one of my favorite…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Overview of my main WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
I didn’t say anyone disliked them. I like all of those ones. Nobody specifically mentioned them though.
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Loopy replied to the topic Inktober in the forum Art 3 years ago
Thanks!
Lol, yeah, I’m just really cautious on this website now because I remember a bunch of people freaking out when someone posted a picture of a chibi cartoon character from a video game a bit ago. I guess they thought she was creepy because she had pointy teeth? -
Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Overview of my main WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Retribution is intentionally designed to flatter, because so many of the others have a curved or jagged look. It’s one of the more solid ones in my opinion. Each of the swords is supposed to look pretty different, so that’s why only one is single edged.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Overview of my main WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @hybridlore @savannah_grace200
(This didn’t work the first time, so I have to repost)

Here’s some concept art I made for each of the swords. I didn’t color anything in, except the gemstones, because I couldn’t really figure out what color each part should be.Any thoughts? Favorite design? I like some of…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@hybridlore @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @kyronthearcanin @savannah_grace2009 @kathleenramm @sarafini
Alright, I might as well post the second chapter now. I’m not entirely sure about this one, and I think it needs to be a bit longer, but it helps clear up a bit of the fog from the first chapter, at least I hope so. Can’t wait to…[Read more]
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I think I can see them? At least I can see this one…
I think so? I’ve been having trouble with my posts too.
@euodia-vision @savannah_grace2009
Okay, good XD I think they worked.
@freedomwriter76
Oh okay, thanks. It just wasn’t showing the topic in recent topics, but I know KP goes through a lot of glitches so I’m glad it still works!