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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@jonas @freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @rae
btw, anyone interested in taking a look at the character boards I just finished up?
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@anyone else who’s read Nahim is bad at guns
I take it back!
So, I was doing some research stuff this afternoon, ya know, adding more suspicious stuff to my search history, and finally looked up how to correctly write a sword fight, cuz I’ve been avoiding those since I’m really bad at fight scenes. During my quest for…[Read more] -
RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
One, Mandin said it would take Nahim several minutes to defeat an opponent with a sword. Exchanges with swords actually usually last for a handful of seconds.
I know that, you know that, Nahim knows that, but Mandin? Sure, he probably does, but he’s trying to make a point. He’s been attempting to get Nahim into guns for a…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @idk
Hi. This is a scene from Guardians Angels. Criticism is requested and welcome.
Nahims sword sang as it sailed towards his opponent. The opponent blocked, swinging its second sword towards Nahim…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Awesome!! I’ll tag a few more of you too.
@stephie @theshadow @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @rae @linus-smallprint @grcr @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed
OK all, how is this for a story starter? I want to honestly know if it catches y’all attention.
Prologue
7/10/2065
Night had fallen over the capital…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Awesome!!! I can’t wait!!
Your drawing of Shadow’s character looks sooo good!
Thank you!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @rae @mineralizedwritings @koshka @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD
Since I showed y’all where Riker is, here’s the most recent Leon scene👀
“‘And we know that all things work together for good to them that love God, to them who are the called according to his purpose.’”
Tears burned Leon’s…
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
DROPPING THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
Just so you know, it’s not edited…heh…heh…
so just bear with me XD
Tags: @jonas @grcr @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @ellette-giselle @rae @and-my-brain-stopped-working
“Please! Someone help me!” Neveah gasped for breath, frantically scanning the crowds for a familiar face.
Where could Sef have gon…
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Loopy replied to the topic Song Suggestions in the forum Music 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@highscribeofaetherium Oh I haven’t heard that one p. I’ll have to listen to it later.
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TheShadow started the topic How dark is too dark? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I have an idea for a book, but I’m not sure if it’s too dark to write about. It was essentially going to be dystopian and where atomic bombs destroyed the major cities of the world, but looking back on it I realized how dark that actually is.
The main message was going to be that no matter how dark the times are, there is always hope and God will…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Song Suggestions in the forum Music 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@highscribeofaetherium Yes! I love their music! Do you have a favorite song?
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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
For once I actually drew something I’m not greatly ashamed to show…
@freed_and_redeemed @grcr @trailblazer @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @theshadow
This is a picture of Tomoko from that short story I shared with you. Sorry about the poor quality, our scanner likes to give everything a greenish or yellowish…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@whalekeeper *now somewhat intimidated* ok
@highscribeofaetherium thanks!
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
why Nico left, where is the baby from the prologue, who are the two different groups here. I know you have hinted at it a little in the prologue, but I’d still like more back story and more info. I tend to be a little more like Tolkine in writing, as in, I have a backstory for everyone, and most of the time, %60 percent of the b…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Great guys!!! I can’t wait to see what you give me to draw! I’ll do multiple characters for each of you, you’ll just have to send them one at a time. Whoever sends one first gets it drawn first. lol.
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RAE replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Sorry, guys, our internet was out for a while cuz of a storm.
Uh…stars, that’s weirdly stated. Sorry, it basically means the triangle scale is at an angle.
Yeah. He may or may not have a slightly longer torso than average. Since I haven’t made that official yet, I omitted it from description.
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 4 weeks ago
@highscribeofaetherium @ellette-giselle
Yeah…oops!
I fixed that in the platform I write on (it’s called Reedsy), thank you for catching that!
@ellette
The reason that I accidently changed that to Selena is because I changed that section a LOT. I just came up with the idea to have their names be changed recently, because when you turn to…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 4 weeks ago
GIRL 😭
That’s so sweet of you. I would be honored 😭❤️
Okay!!! In the post above (where I answered Jonas) I posted the proposed acknowledgements page with your guys’ names in it!!!
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 4 weeks ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom (sorry to tag you again but this needs to be said)
Y’all….I just scrolled through the first 14 pages of this…
I owe you guys BIG TIME! Like you put up with me, a new, confused, emotionally unstable writer and helped me SOOOO MUCH! Words can’t describe how thankful I am that you three were there…[Read more]
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