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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer @highscribeofaetherium
Who’s going next? I can’t, because my character basically has to wait until the rest of the group leaves the house. Unless he just goes on ahead and doesn’t meet up with the rest of them until they get to…wherever they’re going? That…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
He can use his planet’s magic system, but I haven’t figured it out yet, so we’ll just say it’s not working in this dimension lol.
I assume he’s in Celestiar? Conviction’s magic is working, but I guess that can be due to the fact that he is a Arcweaving construct, as opposed to a caster, so he isn’t actively using Arcweav…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
How old is Zahlin though? Given his description it sounds like he’s way older than any of the other characters, which might result in some funny interactions.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
I was imagining a forest, probably only because that’s where the house was before. I didn’t specifically mention the surroundings in Ellis’s POV, so other people could change that if they want to. I did mention dirt though, so wherever Ellis landed has grass and soil.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009
Yeah… I thought we were just gonna make it up as we went…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Great!
Personality-wise, he’s the type of guy who’ll stand in the corner leaning against the wall with his arms crossed, silently judging everyone.
Ha! Sounds like me lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Zahlin is somewhere around 6’6”
Goodness, he’s tall!
Btw what’s this place like?
Do you mean the house itself or Lillen? If you mean the house, it’s basically a mansion with various unexplored rooms if you mean Lillen, the world that the house magically teleported to, I’m not sure. Its @rae ‘s world, so you’d have to ask h…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
That will be hilarious. Conviction already knows some other talking swords, but I’m sure he’ll be interested in meeting another!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer @highscribeofaetherium
I’m just going to post Ellis’s arrival scene now. It ends kind of abruptly because I don’t have anything for him to do before he encounters the rest of the group.
Ellis
One moment, the din of battle rang on Ellis’s ears as he charged t…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, you might want to wait to actually write anything until everyone else gets a bit farther. My character hasn’t actually showed up yet. He’ll arrive separately, so it probably makes the most sense to do that for any new characters.
I know you both expressed interest in this RP at the…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Basically, there are nine characters so far (GRCR just listed them) who somehow ended up in this mysterious house that locked them inside and made them participate in a masquerade ball. Now the house has been mysteriously teleported to a different dimension, and they’re going to end up going on some sort of journey.
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Thanks. I’ll try doing my first mood board. **Me getting a sinking feeling that I’m going to fail**
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009
What are y’all’s thoughts on my depiction of Thing?

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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
I that’s how I did it actually now checking the original document:
You’re telling me. I had more questions, but held my tongue because Thing’s current track record hasn’t been the most helpful for answering them, other than explaining my inability to eat.
Thanks Jonas for explaining what made sense in my head, but c…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium
Okay, so I think the problem is that those sentences are supposed to be his thoughts, but since we’re in first-person narration, we’re already inside his head. The difference is that those are things he was thinking then as opposed to now when he’s narrating the story.
I’m not sure if there’s a goo…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Okay, that’s kind of what I was thinking. I don’t know if it needs to be clearer or not. I don’t know how many other people would notice, and I already had a guess as to why. So maybe rewording it slightly would clear things up.
Ok, fair enough, I’ll tweak it then.
If you’re attached to it, I don’t think it needs to change at any point. It…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
I think those are the results of this being first-person. Using italics would actually be kind of weird, so you might have to actually write ‘I thought’ for each one.
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hybridlore posted an update 2 years, 6 months ago
Hey guys! Are my posts showing up for y’all? When I go to the topic page, I see them, but they don’t show up in recent topics :/
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@hybridlore @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @kyronthearcanin @savannah_grace2009 @kathleenramm @spinner4him @lightoverdarkness6
(Uhhh, has anyone noticed that @sarafini has vanished? All her past posts say anonymous now… Did she just leave?)
Ok, here’s the third chapter! It may be the last I post of it for a while if at all, but we’ll…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 6 months ago
Thanks!!
Yeah Hobie’s my favorite so he probably unintentionally influenced the drawing a bit. I love your Bucky drawing! White on black paper always looks so cool.
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I think I can see them? At least I can see this one…
I think so? I’ve been having trouble with my posts too.
@euodia-vision @savannah_grace2009
Okay, good XD I think they worked.
@freedomwriter76
Oh okay, thanks. It just wasn’t showing the topic in recent topics, but I know KP goes through a lot of glitches so I’m glad it still works!