@highscribeofaetherium
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
To be fair, ‘Character Party’ was named before it became a fantasy adventure.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009
Whisp
Whisp descended into hysterical laughter. This situation was all so very funny! Then she saw Krenna, Loop, and Ops walk around the corner. She gulped.
Krenna
Krenna rounded the corner to find three people–well two people, and Whisp. Krenna raised an eyebrow at her, and Whisp seemed to wither…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@everyone else
Snake
He’d been way too tired yesterday…..
Slept through a fight or something. Not like him.
Breakfast was good, though. It was worth getting up for, at least. [no idea what they’re eating lol]
He stood up and went to grab another portion. Apparently, the people here hadn’t thought of including…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
I started laughing while writing this XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @rae
Fracture
He heard distant footsteps, but didn’t think much of them. He was too engrossed in his mourning ceremony to give them much thought.
That is, until someone nearly kicked him in the head.
“AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” He screamed, his voice cracking horribly halfway through his scream. He jumped to his feet,…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @rae @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @hanako @acancello @hybridlore @anyone
This is a short story I had to write for my creative writing class. I thought I’d share it here as well. I’m not necessarily looking for feedback–I got plenty already–but if you have any thoughts, feel free to share them.
Blade of the…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium
So with my revision of my WIP, I’m changing things a little. I’m thinking of writing it in first person now. I started writing yesterday, but now I’m stuck! How should I continue?
Also, is there anything I could improve on?
(Am I changing things too much?)
Chapter 1
The world is a dark…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Just fight him or something. The Sword chirped, That always seems to help.
Lol
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Idk. I’ve gone twice already. @highscribeofaetherium hasn’t gone at all.
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Loopy replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 years ago
Thanks XD It’s the honest truth
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@highscribeofaetherium @jonas @everyone concerned with this RP.
Nahim
Nahim groaned as he stirred, his head feeling like it was split in two. He tried to remember what happened.
“Good morning.” Someone said, Nahim didn’t know who.
With a flash, the memory of Zahlin entered his mind. Oh how could Nahim have been so stupid to get distracted by…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@jonas @rae @highscribeofaetherium
I think the groups look good… Kari gets along with most people so finding a particularly conflicting partner for her would be hard. Plus my schedule’s busier so it’s probably better if she has a role that’s not super important at the moment. I might have a chance to pop on here tomorrow morning before I leave…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
You have literally no sense of humor if you can’t even tell when you say something funny.
I literally have no idea what you’re talking about.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Should we start the next day, or wait just to make sure nobody wanted to add anything.
To me it didn’t seem like any of the characters would really have anything to do, so…
Yeah, we’re going on, whether people like it or not lol.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Bye!
Tomorrow, we start the morning unless there are any objections…
Though I still might write my RP tonight.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
You should be. I will somehow, someway make Nahim and Zahlin best friends.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Nahim would be set to the forges. Ellis sent to train others. So on so forth. Fennin plans to set the pairs to work on different things so they can get going to save Lillen sooner. Also, it gets them working on strong points.
Don’t worry about Zahlin and the forging, Nahim understands and respects vows, his culture…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Lol I don’t know whether to be insulted or amused.
So, you’re saying they do? Why would you be insulted? Or amused? He can still do non bladed weapons though.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Okay that works.
You said other bladed weapons. He could do spears or something. Also, I’m not an expert on metal working, but I don’t think that swords start out sharp, I don’t see how they could, in which case he’d be fine.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Okay, here are the characters that we’ve paired, and the ones left.
Nahim – Zahlin
Ellis – Ottoline
Kate – Nora
Hugo, Amir, Hedieh, Kari, Snake, and Kaine is still here, even though Min isn’t in this RP right now. It’s an even number including Kaine, so we have to use him. Maybe we can do him with Snake, since…[Read more]
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