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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Nahim
Zahlin punched Nahim in the head and kicked him across the room, where he fell against a table leg, half propped up. He leaned against it with his breathing growing a little heavy. His eyes were half-shut.
Pain. It throbbed through his head, pounding against the walls of his skull in rthymn of his heart. He gripped…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Yeah, @ancello @esther-c Hugo and/or Hedieh should probably get Fennin at some point. These two will kill each other otherwise!
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Lol! I probably won’t hurt Zahlin eitherÂ
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
If they stabbed each other would they die?No punctured lungs please. And no abdominal wounds either. We already know neither will actually die, but if you want Zahlin to cut Nahim or something, I don’t mind. (Such an odd topic, lol!) Though I can’t promise you Nahim won’t get Zahlin back for that.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Nahim
Zahlin hooked Nahim’s leg while trying to stab him in the face. Nahim moved out of the way and body slammed Zahlin into the wall, using his sword to block Zahlin’s. Stepping back, Nahim waited for Zahlin to collect himself (which was not long) before they clashed swords again. Nashim saw an opening. Using one hand,…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Look above
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Are you going to RP?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@rae @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium
Do you think we should throw in some more characters? None of them seem to get along. Drama is great, but it would be nice to balance it out with some characters not absolutely hating each other. I’m not sure what character I would want to add, though.
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Lol, I do the same so much, hence my forum signature. I come on, I see something but read it wrong, then I trip over myself and hope that I can edit my already posted post before someone reads it! 😂
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Ah, of course, lying. That should work 😅
No, Glace wasn’t lying. He was serious, would you want to have to trust your life to Facture? That’s a scary thought.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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Ruth posted an update 3 years ago
@grcr @spinner4him @jonas @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @hanako @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @devastate-lasting @power @anyone randomly looking at my profile.
I would like some serious criticizing on this scene. I don’t want to hear anything like “It’s good” I want to hear stuff like, “It needs help here…” “It’s fine here…” I don’t…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Nahim
Splitting headache was right. Nahum’s head was complaining about the sudden movements. But he kept on, dodging, blinking, striking, missing. He studied the style Zahlin fought. It is good, skilled, practised, expieranced. He didn’t hold his blade like he had learned more recently, no, Zahlin was taught when he was…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
NahimÂ
Nahim smiled. “At least I have an honest opponent. And honestly, I think that we can match each other.” He swung in from the side, but was blocked. Zahlin stabbed and Nahim moved to the side, letting the sword miss him by a couple inches. “I usually have defeated my opponents by now.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium
I posted an entire thing on Glace in Back stories, the thing that shapes life. Go to the second post of Glace, not the first since I edited the post, but it posted the edited version as a separate post. 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
He thinks Fracture is insane and thinks himself to be a real person who exists. Like that condition where people think they are Napoleon or someone like that.
Ohh that’s funny, lol.
He might be on to something…Fracture
“Didn’t you get that I was insulting you?” the girl said.
“I don’t understand!” Fracture…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
You guys just got the start of the many times I’ve almost killed my favorite character in his first twenty two years of life.
And Zahlin should watch out. Nahim isn’t yelling, which he doesn’t usually yell when he’s ready to fight seriously. No jokes this time, he is ready to wound or kill. He won’t wear his helmet, and if…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
You’re such monsters lol! Jk
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Nahim could ask Zahlin to hold one Nahim’s sword, but why and how? Maybe Nahim asks to see Zahlin’s weapon, but again, why?
Maybe we skip to when Nahim’s pounding out a blade (since I just realized swords kinda need to have a pointy tip pounded in and not moulded right? Maybe spearheads are in the moulds since they can be…[Read more]
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I think the second part flows pretty well!
This paragraph, “Something impacted Nahim’s armor about six inches above where his plate ended at the bottom of the rib cage. There was a boom and a flash from the object. Nahim drew his gun and aimed into the fog. His helmet searched for some signature from the person who had shot at him, but it could d…[Read more]
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