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RAE replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Ah, of course, lying. That should work 😅
No, Glace wasn’t lying. He was serious, would you want to have to trust your life to Facture? That’s a scary thought.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
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RAE posted an update 2 years, 6 months ago
@grcr @spinner4him @jonas @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @hanako @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @devastate-lasting @power @anyone randomly looking at my profile.
I would like some serious criticizing on this scene. I don’t want to hear anything like “It’s good” I want to hear stuff like, “It needs help here…” “It’s fine here…” I don’t…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Nahim
Splitting headache was right. Nahum’s head was complaining about the sudden movements. But he kept on, dodging, blinking, striking, missing. He studied the style Zahlin fought. It is good, skilled, practised, expieranced. He didn’t hold his blade like he had learned more recently, no, Zahlin was taught when he was…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Nahim
Nahim smiled. “At least I have an honest opponent. And honestly, I think that we can match each other.” He swung in from the side, but was blocked. Zahlin stabbed and Nahim moved to the side, letting the sword miss him by a couple inches. “I usually have defeated my opponents by now.”
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RAE replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium
I posted an entire thing on Glace in Back stories, the thing that shapes life. Go to the second post of Glace, not the first since I edited the post, but it posted the edited version as a separate post. 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
He thinks Fracture is insane and thinks himself to be a real person who exists. Like that condition where people think they are Napoleon or someone like that.
Ohh that’s funny, lol.
He might be on to something…Fracture
“Didn’t you get that I was insulting you?” the girl said.
“I don’t understand!” Fracture…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
You guys just got the start of the many times I’ve almost killed my favorite character in his first twenty two years of life.
And Zahlin should watch out. Nahim isn’t yelling, which he doesn’t usually yell when he’s ready to fight seriously. No jokes this time, he is ready to wound or kill. He won’t wear his helmet, and if…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
You’re such monsters lol! Jk
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Nahim could ask Zahlin to hold one Nahim’s sword, but why and how? Maybe Nahim asks to see Zahlin’s weapon, but again, why?
Maybe we skip to when Nahim’s pounding out a blade (since I just realized swords kinda need to have a pointy tip pounded in and not moulded right? Maybe spearheads are in the moulds since they can be…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Zahlin could make some comment about Nahim’s headache that is a little, Idk, Zahlin-ish? And Nahim yells at him and it escalates.
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
He could drop the vial (cap still on of course) and that would get Nahim angry.
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
If Zahlin insults, half joking or not, Nahim’s family, it will cause a fight.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Probably Zahlin saying something mean, or refusing to touch sharpened objects.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Things should get more interesting once they have to deal with weapons that are sharp…
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Nahim is not thinking, I think that’s a reason why. But wait for it…
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
For RP reasons, everyone can and is speaking English, though it is called different names (trade tongue by Nahim) but they can’t read writing. Especially only Realm read Realn Runes! As I dais, Nahim is having a bad day.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Magic can probably translate into one language. Reading… I don’t think that will work 😅
That’s what I was thinking. Boy, Kate, Nora, Kari, and Amir are going to find that annoying, assuming they’ll have to write things down.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Lol, yeah it’s impressive they’ve lasted this long! Hold on for me to write an RP…
Yeah, Nahim could have just told Zahlin to put it all in.
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Lol, yeah it’s impressive they’ve lasted this long! Hold on for me to write an RP…
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I think the second part flows pretty well!
This paragraph, “Something impacted Nahim’s armor about six inches above where his plate ended at the bottom of the rib cage. There was a boom and a flash from the object. Nahim drew his gun and aimed into the fog. His helmet searched for some signature from the person who had shot at him, but it could d…[Read more]
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