HighScribe

@linus-smallprint

WHAT! He didn’t go save Martha!!!!

Alan! Grrrrrr!

It was a good chapter. I liked it. I especially liked the brothers, (John and James.) Their relationship is a lot of fun.

i don’t know who you meant by anyone going to far, but I don’t think anyone did. However, I thi9nk saying Alan is a murderer is going to far. He hasn’t…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thank you! I’m so glad you liked it!

Oh, i’ll keep those tips in mind.

@mineralizedwritings

Aw! THANK YOU SO MUCH!

I’m so glad someone read it!

I posted it a little while ago, but no one said anything, and I was thinking, “Oh dear, was it really that bad?”

lol.

I kinda felt like I was reading an anime lol.

I hope that’s a good thing!

@the_lost-journal

Nope, no war.

I should have snooped on your profile. Lol. Then I could have figured it out be reading more about you. lol.

For all you ladies on here, there’s an online camp that runs every few months, set up sort of like our little kingdom here to help encourage writers and help them reach a goal. Before camp you’ll set a goal for yourself (writing ## chapters/scenes/blog posts/words/etc.) and try to reach it in that month. You’re a part of a tent of about 10 or so…[Read more]

Yayayayayayyyy!

I’ll definitely be posting on here this weekend!!

@ellette-giselle

Oooh, I like it!! I could definitely feel and experience what Jonathan was feeling and going through.

The only suggestion I would have would be to eliminate some of the passive voice (“The floor was sinking…” “…his brother was on his hands and knees…”). It will tighten up the prose and draw the reader in more.

But that’…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Thanks for reaching out, Kefa!! I’d love to chat some more!! 🤗

Hmm… my WIP…

Well, I have a few, but a couple of those have been put on the back burner for now. They were mostly ones written while I was trying to figure out my genre. Which, I’ve decided, is probably gonna be contemporary young adult fiction and histori…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, I mean, it’s really no big deal to me because they’re spelled slightly different (Halle and Hallie), and how they look and act is completely different so they’re very different people in my head. 🤷🏻‍♀️

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow

Who’s ready for the next scene?

Chapter the 22nd – The Murderer

I need to read Little House on the Prairie again.

The is one character in this chapter that I’m wondering if I’ve gone too far with him. Does it make sense why he does what he does in this chapter? (This…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’m holding on to hope that Eric will realize how serious what he did was and come to a true repentance. Though it almost seems to me, (especially after he did that) that he wasn’t ever a true believer but the Saviour was more of almost a”lucky charm” to him. Something to bring him happiness and keep him safe.

Time will tell for this.

@the_lost-journal

Ah, she is vengeful and sad. You could give her a little peace at the end; maybe she finds out what truly happened to her husband.

its also a place where you can find incineration… inspiration… and ya know maybe even copy *cough cough* I mean stea- NO WAIT I mean get ideas from other authors….

😂😂😂

@the_lost-journal

This is a great idea!! I’ll definitely share some of mine here.

@the_lost-journal

First off, I don’t know how anyone could think I was a guy. i mean, the way I write i’m clearly a girl, and if you can’t tell that, look at my profile picture.

second……

what meme are you talking about? I’m confused……..