HighScribe

@hybridlore

I do two chapters each day and then post them. I may jump the gun today so that I have some fallback though.

@ellette-giselle

Wow. That’s a lot of drafts.

How far through this draft are you? Finished?

@hybridlore

This is draft number…… 7. I think.

I wrote this when I was 13 and have done rewrites almost every year since. This time I scrapped the draft and started over completely since I know the story inside and out. I feel like I can breathe again and it’s going much better.

@ellette-giselle

You didn’t like it before? Lol.

So how much of this have you written?

It’ll be interesting to see what happens with Viper.

He’s a tough guy who takes in a little kid. Plus, he doesn’t seem to want to be there any more than Jonathan does.

@ellette-giselle

You’re welcome!

@hybridlore

Do you!!? I like him too. 😁

I’m so glad you like it. I’m actually also starting to like it as well.

Any thoughts about the new situation Jonathan is in? Also, out of curiosity, what makes you like Jim? (I like him, but i know his whole arc. I’m interested to see what you like. )

@linus-smallprint

Thank you so much for this! It was really helpful!

btw, Tintin is THE BEST. 😁

@ellette-giselle

I like Jim more and more…

Good chapters! I really like this book.

@linus-smallprint

Yay!!!

Thank so much for all the help you have given. I’m glad you’ve enjoyed it!! I shall take a look now.

@ellette-giselle

IT”S TIME FOR FEEDBACK!

The dawn will come

Please remember this is my opinion. You do not have to take any advice I give. These are just thing that I think would be a good idea. Please let me know if you have any questions, or need clarification.

Thank you very much for allowing me to participate in this. It’s been fun reading…[Read more]

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

( @kyronthearcanin       @jonas      @power )

CHAPTER 7 and 8!!!!

I made a matching mask and cape, and the cape is amazingly red and flowy. I should wear it more but I need to fix the collar.

@loopylin

Thanks! You really should if you want to.

@ellette-giselle

😁 She’s my favorite character.

@jonas

Awesome, it worked!

Try this one:

h ttps://forms.gle/ARuKQuzYuHSnGpFR7

@whalekeeper

I assume you removed the space as usual? Let me take a look and try to fix it. Just a minute.

Oh. I want to be writing short stories consistently. Those I might give to people for feedback. Hopefully that’s not too confusing.

@jonas

I don’t think the link is working for me.
Just to be clear, because my submission form might be confusing. I just want to be kept accountable for getting a couple chapters done every week. I won’t be sharing them. But I might ask for brainstorming help now and then, and I like helping other people if they need it.

@loopylin

Which one have you been getting more ideas for recently?

@grcr @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @rae @highscribeofaetherium @koshka

Reminder that the goal is to have outlines done by the end of Monday a week from today (if you are doing one.) I come with yet another boring form to fill out. This is to try to help organize feedback groups (since there are too many people for everyone to give…[Read more]