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@raxforge @rae

If Ben, Flare, and Baron head for the river, they shouldn’t be followed too closely. The ironwalkers are jostled enough from Marcel’s strike that they have their equivalent to severe nerve damage and/or concussions. 👍

@raxforge yay!

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore

Baron (Brutus)—with group 1, Elderstrand edge

Brutus sighed. Why did he even care? Here his body was tearing itself apart and he wanted to go back to help Flare and Ben and the boy.

Mustering his strength, Brutus got back up from where he lay, gritting his teeth as he…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Come on, Ellette! You’re gonna leave me on that!? Your cliffhangers…

Just teasing. I like Julian’s reaction—it feels very realistic like Linus said, even though I’m not a boy so I don’t know exactly how men react to those situations. As far as I know, it looks good.

@keilah-h

HAHA!

I actually love some of the tron soundtrack!!! Some of it I can’t stand, but this song and a few others I really love!

Here, you should listen to this song. Honestly, the whole soundtrack is great!

bored so im sharing more pics. this one is of all the main characters of my current/most important wip, TPE.

(starting from the girl on the phone and swirling out to the boy on the pillow: Evelyn, Leif, Cameron, Jara, Henson, Kiran, Blaine, Frin, Iniko, Lily, Ira (in the far back), and Flaz.)

@keilah-h

Glad that makes sense. Some people have thought I was a little crazy for adding that and shouldn’t be playing around with adding demonic powers to my books. But we LIVE IN A WORLD with demonic powers people. *sigh* Glad this makes sense to someone.

From the way Linus asked the question I’m wondering what his response will be.…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Oooooo!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!! LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT!!!!! Ahhhhhh!!!! I’m so excited!!!!!!

@theducktator @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @anyone-else

Riker Aesthetic for the 3rd book👀

and Bucky aesthetic (for fun)

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @rae @keilah-h Thanks y’all! 😁

@keilah

like in Freedom’s Fire you see him as mostly heartless and cruel, but in all the other books he is more humanized–he has a brother, he has a family, he has reasons for why he did what he did. Not that they were good reasons, mind you, but it means that it upsets you that…

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@linus-smallprint

(Though I guess Darrien might be panicked.)

Yeah, he’s panicked. He has no idea who Julian is, so the only reason that seems reasonable for a soldier to be here is to arrest those who were hiding him.

Again, another lie that feels wrong to me, and not just because I believe it is wrong for Christians to lie. I think it is…

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@ellette-giselle

 Forth section:

Joseph looked up at Darrien. His face was white, and his finger’s tightened on the door frame. He used his other hand to gently push Joseph back. “Please, the children had nothing to do with it, nor did the women. I was the one who hid him. Take me but leave the others.”

This felt unessasary. Julian only said t…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

(By the way, I should let you know that I’m not bothering to read the feedback others are giving you, so if anything has come up that you want more thought on, please let me know.)

Will do. It’s mostly the newest section from this morning that I’m anxious about, because the dynamics are delicate. as you will see. And I’m i…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Poor Linus. You’ll have so much catching up to do. Sorry.

Yeah, yesterday was rather busy. Oh well. I have time today.

(By the way, I should let you know that I’m not bothering to read the  feedback others are giving you, so if anything has come up that you want more thought on, please let me know.)

Feedback for the third se…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Okay, that’s a lot of exclamation marks. You know five exclamation marks is a sure sign of madness, right? But you couldn’t settle for five, you went for six. (But who am I kidding, we’re all authors. Madness is sure to come with that.)

How dare you question my wise and perfect choice of exclamation marks! I have perfect contr…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Feedback for the second section:

Don’t have too much to say about this one. Joseph kind of falling back to where he was before, but it is easy to see why.

He could hear Noah and Sabina praying together, and for a moment he thought Aaron was captured, for this was how it had been.

This is a nice peak back into what they were all…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

NEXT SECTION!!!!!!

Okay, that’s a lot of exclamation marks. You know five exclamation marks is a sure sign of madness, right? But you couldn’t settle for five, you went for six. (But who am I kidding, we’re all authors. Madness is sure to come with that.) Ellette, what are you doing to Joseph?

Feedback for the first of those…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

 

Wooph! Got a lot to catch up on! Let’s see how far I get before I have class…

Yeah. Sorry about that. I kinda went on an editing streak and hybridlore was encouraging it. lol.

In the part where he is watching Arron in the fountain, he puts an end to it, and I was saying he was harsh based of of that. But I forgot tha…

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@ellette-giselle

Wooph! Got a lot to catch up on! Let’s see how far I get before I have class…

It was actually not Betsy. It was Corrie and Betsy’s Niece, Peter and Reuben’s brother, and it was Peter and Reuben who were under the table because someone had seen them with the Jews and informed on them. (At least, that’s what it say’s in Corrie’…

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@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h

NEXT SECTION!!

Joseph sat at the table staring at nothing.

In the corner, Sabina was holding a sobbing Eric, and Asher was sitting beside Noah, his face pressed against him. Alicia was at the other end of the table, her hands over her face.

Darrien had a hand on Joseph’s shoulder…

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