HighScribe

@hybridlore

Thank you! I know, I was thinking the same thing when I looked it over again. 😂

Glad it feels realistic. I kept breaking his character here in the other drafts, so I’m really working on taking it more slowly. (Even if it makes me want to shake some sense into him!)

First, how would they get Jonathan back into the…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

 
~FEEDBACK~
The Narrow Path Trilogy Book 2
 
Character:
~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Martha. I just really liked her and could relate as an older sister. Some of her struggles felt similar to my own.

Eric was really interesting and fun. I also really liked James.

Alan…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

You gotta set it up like one of those quizzes someday. You know, the one people always use for scheduling group events that I can never figure out how to make.

@rae

I always name them after book or movie characters. (mostly books)

For instance, this time around we have Mathias and Cornflower (Redwall)

Puss-in-boots and Kitty Softpaws (Puss In Boots)

Matimeo and Iris (Matimeo A Tale Of Redwall)

And Joe Shanks (Green Ember)

Try books and see who works. I did Jane Austen once, Lord of the Rings,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters! The rebellion is reminding me of the church meetings in my story.

Jonathan’s adjustment is pretty realistic. He’s struggling, but wants to please the people who are teaching him despite himself.

I don’t really know why they can’t just let him go–that was a bit blurry for me. I know he was captured and taken…[Read more]

@rae

Aww, they sound adorable! Sir Fluffyface is such a cute name 🤣

Name them after characters. That’s always a solid choice. 😉

@linus-smallprint @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @whalekeeper

Four new chapters today! 😳

Don’t feel like you have to read them all right away if you don’t have time. This is the end of Part 2.

@whalekeeper

Hero forge is a cool tool! It’s not that hard to make a detailed miniature of it.

You have inspired me to share the random doodles I did with my brother on a smaller piece of paper. I’ll let you guess who did what.

Also, I feel honoured to loose The Game with you.

@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator

Here is a link to some feedback questions I would appreciate if you could take the time to answer  for TNPT II:
The Sword Feedback – 1st Draft (In Microsoft Word)

Hold the phone! @theducktator Just found the old update where we were last coming up with kitten names, and you suggested Sir Fluffyface! I think that’s awesome! I think I might just name my favorite that cuz I think it fits so well!

@loopylin @whalekeeper @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @freed_and_redeemed @the_lost-journal @highscribeofaetherium @anyone else

So my cat Marbles had 6 kittens who are now almost two weeks old and I can’t think of names I like for any of them. I will be going back to the update where i last asked for help naming…[Read more]

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

NEW CHAPTERS

30-31!!!!!

Sometimes I find a huge piece of paper and doodle on it with my siblings. This time I doodled a frog without really looking, and it came out like this.

It’s an absolute monstrosity and now I don’t trust myself to doodle without paying attention

@linus-smallprint @keilah-h

I’ve tried using that designer too. Never got to the same level of detail as Keilah’s characters here. 🙂

@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator

Sorry for the wait. But Chapter the 42nd is out!

And this concludes The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword! Thank you for reading! I’ll get some feedback questions ready soon!

@loopylin

Understandable. It’ll probably take everyone a bit to get in a good rhythm.

@loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @koshka

Reminder that today is our goal for sharing first chapters (or just word counts, or whatever, depending on what exactly you’re doing.)

I personally am a bit behind where I wanted to be, but I will hopefully get things posted by the end of the day. I don’t want to get…[Read more]