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@ellette-giselle

What is Jonathan’s arc supposed to be?

@hybridlore

Okay, nice!

Yes, lolol. He did apologize. For real this time.

How about Michael? Thoughts on what he said?

@ellette-giselle

He’s slowly softening to the rebels, and becoming curious about their strength and hope. Also, he apologized.

I just watched Animation vs. Minecraft, and it was super wholesome, I loved it

…And here I am, praising the game and not talking about Alan Becker. XD I still haven’t watched. Next chance I get, probably this week.

I think some YouTubers make Minecraft way too loud and showy. My brothers watch competitive YouTubers and I’ve never caught on to that. The game by itself is much more impactful.

Minecraft is the kind of thing I never thought I’d enjoy. But one day it clicked. I think the combination of the music and graphics have the same uncanny feel as old memories. Pieces of the world make sense, but much of it is random and silent. It’s such a strange, melancholic feeling.

@hybridlore

Yes, but not anyone that we know. yet

Jonathan’s arc is starting to turn around, yay! 😁 I liked the way you did that,

So what are you meaning by this? (not that your’re wrong, just interested to see how these sections are coming across to the reader.)

@ellette-giselle

Hey, I was right.

Good chapters. Jonathan’s arc is starting to turn around, yay! 😁 I liked the way you did that, and the ending of the last chapter.

@keilah-h

well, one thing, it made me decide I NEVER would want to ever play minecraft. That game would bore me out of my mind. XD

@highscribeofaetherium

Well, first off, I was really annoyed by the time I got to it. Just the whole minecraft stuff was driving me out of my mind. I felt like with that one he was relying more on the novelty of having his stick figures in a video game then his actual story.

I liked Purple and The King’s story, and I knew at once that the boy…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

yes….

@linus-smallprint

@highscribeofaetherium

@keilah-h

So not to take this over again, but I watched the animation vs. Minecraft

So…. why was I supposed to cry?

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NEW CHAPTERS

@the_lost-journal

Writers can insert two sides of themselves into that conversation and it still tracks. XD

@elishavet-pidyon

I appreciate the thoughts! I hadn’t thought much about items before – although specific things come to mind. My goal is to make this character less of a person to mourn for, and more of a person to enjoy reading about. *Bows and offers you a jar of glitter to poof yourself back home if needed*

Just did the math, and the entire Baron Chronicles (at 1,500 edited words per half hour) would take me 11.7 hours!

Which means I may or may not go over 12 hours tomorrow cuz, for one, I know it’ll probably take me a little longer and two, I have another short story that I’ve had on my mind related to the Baron Chronicles but will not be published…[Read more]

Hey!

So last year I wrote for 12 hours on July 1st, and I kinda want to do it again if I can. It turns out perfect cuz it’s actually supposed to rain where I am tomorrow so I have an excuse to stay indoors.

I am going to add editing and writing this time cuz The Baron Chronicles needs some more editing love (haven’t done much since…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

I’ve been on KP like a year and a half by now, and I have never seen anyone be that way to another writer here. Most the time, I actually feel like people don’t criticize my writing enough on here.  So yeah, maybe people are like that other places, but I’ve never seen it here. Maybe some jokes, but never anything serious.

@the_lost-journal

WHY IS IT SO RELATABLE!!!!!!

I feel like that last one is definitely how people come up to me after reading some of my stuff…..