HighScribe

Been a while since I posted on here, but I would like a little feedback for this little creation in Canva from 3 in the morning (I really need help sleeping.)

Obviously, this won’t be the actual cover (you kidding, I still have a little ways to go before that), this is just me having fun.

@rae

Also, props to Gabriel for being a responsible guy and making the hatchet a cover. I appreciate his efforts.

@rae

Lucille

Lucy fell into a doze. When she sometimes opened her eyes, a dream haze took over, and the wallpaper flickered, the flowers blooming against each other and cascading down the paper. Fuzzy orange light stained her vision. Her mind retreated into her body and she couldn’t bring herself to stir.

The labyrinth had been such a strange w…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yes of course! I’ll compile some ideas and get back to you later this week!

(Mayyyyy or may not have forgotten about this 🫣😂)

@ellette-giselle

(though the wild one is more Baron-sih to my mind. XD)

Same. Don’t worry, he will keep his ruffled, unruly hair for most of the book. This drawing was supposed to be from his time with Jenna.

It does kinda hover in the area where you know who it is, but it doesn’t exactly look like him because of the hair XD

Thank you!

@loopylin

Rory

He looked up and down the street. “Do we take the bus…. or do I continue to carry you?”

@rae

Wow! I like the combed look, (though the wild one is more Baron-sih to my mind. XD)

Yes…. *gets a ruler* yes, they are a little uneven, but I never would have seen it if you hadn’t said it. I guess next time, lay down a ruler on the pencil sketch to check that, lol. 🤣

But really! This looks really good! I like it a lot! Though I have to…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Did you know that today instead of the 25th was originally the day that children got presents? (Personally, I like waiting almost a month for them instead of getting them right away.)

Same.

@koshka

Sure! That sounds fun!

@whalekeeper

Gabriel Mai

Gabriel reached up into his hair, untying the red ribbon holding on his mask. He set his mask down on a wardrobe by the bed, sighing. He glanced at Lucy, making sure she slept.

He took off his bag of plundered items, setting the hatchet on the floor, pulling out the scraps of leather, twine, and needle from the bag.…[Read more]

@rae

Time can pass while she’s in bed and Gabriel can do whatever he wants

Lucille

The warm mattress and sheets felt familiar and alien at once, after so much walking and uncertainty. Lucy rolled over a few times and held her face into her arms. The soft warmth held her above and pushed her adrift, so everything left her be.

@whalekeeper

Gabriel Mai

Gabriel caught her, holding her carefully. He couldn’t smell any fresh blood, nor see any. He felt her arms gently, searching for any heat radiating through the bandages, any sign of infection. Finding none, he shifted her so her head rested on his shoulder, picking up her hatchet and few other fallen knickknacks…[Read more]

@loopylin

HA. Thank you.

I suppose she’s literally in limbo until you choose to pull her out or the end of the world arrives.

@loopylin

That reminds me, deaths never happen in these roleplays but they shouldn’t be so taboo. As long as it works, it’s just an AU.

@rae

Lucille

Lucy rubbed her knuckles into her eyes and then against the wall, unable to push the haze out of her head. This wasn’t the time to be tired. They had to get out, they had to keep walking.

She tried to voice her frustrations, but her words turned into a high-pitched groan. She took a step and stumbled into Gabriel’s arms where he knelt.

@loopylin

Well you certainly scared me. My little sis will freak when I read that part out loud.

@whalekeeper

Gabriel Mai

Gabriel knelt by Lucy. “Tell me what’s wrong. Lucy?”

Idk, what else to write, sorry 🙁

@loopylin

The girl’s wide eyes dulled from silver to gray, and a final puff of air escaped her stone lips.

WAITWHATNO FELICITY

@rae

That second to last paragraph was really good, I like the way you wrote it.

Lucille

Lucy dropped the hatchet on the floor and walked several paces, realizing that it wouldn’t be too good to fall on it. A kid in the east fields had fallen on his father’s ax two years ago and there had been many cautionary stories before that.

She slid to…[Read more]

That was 100% big brother Gabriel

@whalekeeper

Gabriel Mai

As he walked on, Gabriel was internally debating if it was safe for Lucy to have a hatchet or not. When she was carrying his knife, she was careful, but that was briefly. Now she was toting a dangerous little blade with her like a trinket. As they passed through the rooms, Gabriel took some leather and a sewing kit he…[Read more]