HighScribe

@raxforge

My character, Kefa’s characters, and two of Jonas’ characters are on a boat on a river with some NPCs. They’re leaving the city.

@savannah_grace2009

Very well done scene!

@the_lost-journal

It’s a weekend camp some people from my church go to every year. It’s in winter, so that’s why it’s called snow camp (though it doesn’t seem like there’s gonna be any snow this year :/). I’m leaving tomorrow.

I’m 15.

I don’t like math so I didn’t care to do it!( ^-^)

I relate to this sentence lol.

Also, your signature is funny.

@rae

Alright! I’ll try to get some feedback to you later today, it might take a bit.

@rae

I read the first part, and this is great! Are you looking more for a sentence-by-sentence critique, or just overall feedback?

Today if I can.

@jonas

Ok, I’ll try to do something, hopefully before Snow Camp.

@loopylin

I know, I’m just not quite sure what to RP atm, so I was just offering to think something up if it would been helpful.

I can RP if that will get things moving.

@jonas

No no no continue!

@theducktator

Same. I love coffee (even though I seem to be immune to caffeine? It’s weird).

@savannah_grace2009

That’s cool!@koshka

I’m in the middle of some videos I have to watch to get a driver’s license sometime in the near future, and they’re dreadfully…dreadful. Especially since I’m not desensitized to stuff at all…

I KNOW.

@the_lost-journal

I was only 14 when I joined, so you’re really not much younger than most people in the forum.

@savannah_grace2009

Poor Ottoline 🙁

Does she have fire powers now??

@savannah_grace2009

They look great, I love them!

@raxforge

Close, I’m 15.

@raxforge

Ok, guess how old I am lol.

Also, as a Wisconsinite, I approve of you signature 🧀

@loopylin

Ah, that’s fun! I love it!

@theducktator

OOOF *doubles over*

Well I’ll have you know that after I’m done with all my words I’ll have 24 snowballs, and revenge will be mine.