HighScribe

@jonas

How old is Ellis? Young adult?

@grcr

Sounds good.

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah 😅 though to be fair, his planet is smaller than Earth, and thus has less gravity so people tend to be a bit taller. He’s still a couple inches taller than most people though.

I was just talking about what the general area looked like.

@GRCR

lol 😂

Btw what’s this place like?

@imtoolazytotaganyonelol

K, here’s my character (s, I guess). This is pretty rough, but it should get the idea across. They’re also pretty underdeveloped but that’s why I chose them.

Zahlin (the ‘H’ is silent):

Zahlin is somewhere around 6’6”. He has shaggy black hair streaked with grey. Not sure about his eyes yet. Pale skin. His hands are cov…[Read more]

@jonas

This is going to be great XD XD

@jonas

I love Conviction 😂

Oh no. The character I’m going to use also has a talking sword lol.

Now I’m imagining just a couple of swords, having a conversation 🤣🤣

@jonas

*thumbs up*

@jonas

Ok! 😃 thanks, I’ll introduce my character later.

@all-the-peoples

Im considering joining here. Could someone tell me what’s going on 😅?

@rae

Yw! Haha don’t worry there’s really no ‘right’ and ‘wrong’ when it comes to mood boards. Everyone on KP has insanely different styles.

@rae

Personally, I use paint.net. It’s probably not the best, but it works.

@jonas

It worked for me.

I’ll try.

@jonas

I haven’t, but I haven’t tried to edit anything recently.

@rae

Those are really cool!

@thearcaneaxiom

That’s fair. If it feels natural to you, than I’d say leave it, as long as it isn’t creating weird jarring breaks that throw the reader out of the story, which I don’t think it is, except for here:

You’re telling me.

Where I had to pause for a moment and reread it. I’m still not sure if I understand this line 😂…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Sure. Let’s see…here, I found this paragraph especially confusing:

You’re telling me. I had more questions, but held my tongue because Thing’s current track record hasn’t been the most helpful for answering them, other than explaining my inability to eat.

And there were a couple other spots where it switches to present tense lik…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Just popping in, I know I haven’t been very active on here…

Is 6 MC’s too many, or should I stick with my original 5?

It really depends. If Liv is going to be important enough to be an MC and if you can make each of their viewpoints interesting and make every character unique, I’d say go for it. I know GodlyFantasy has, li…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

(Uhhh, has anyone noticed that @sarafini has vanished? All her past posts say anonymous now… Did she just leave?)

I didn’t notice that before, but I went back and looked, and yeah. I guess she’s not on the forum anymore?

Great chapter! The bounce between present and past tense was very confusing, though. Were the parts in p…[Read more]