Hannah Olsen

@salome01w4g yeah, kinda the point. XD

No, The Force Awakens is amazing. You have to see it. *doesn’t say anything else*

@xonos-darkgrate @salome01w4g @daeus agreed, Krennic is awesome. Favorite character… eh. I can’t pick. 😛 Probably Cassian. I love K2 though.

@xonos-darkgrate I totally love that guy. Rogue One wasn’t my favorite movie, but the villain wins big awesomeness points imo.

@xonos-darkgrate YES. Oh please, don’t get me started. It’s got to be one of my favorite movies ever, and I’m really picky too.

@XonosDarkgrate are you a Rogue One fan???

@raevynstar
I think you could do one of two things. You could go with what @daeus said and make her completely confident in herself…or you could make her doubt herself and her abilities. Maybe she’s really insecure and doesn’t quite know who she is. Anyway, just some thoughts.

@Daeus yep. Nailed it.

@Daeus I likey. 👍 😃

@Emily
I love that quote…and the lighthouse. 🙂

Okay! I think I’ve got it now. I still want to come up with a dramatic tagline, but the rest of it’s done. What do you think?

Trevor is in a mess. After traveling back in time, he and his sister get trapped in medieval England where a mad scientist rules the country with technology and terror. As war brews, Trevor gets the chance to prove his…[Read more]

@Daeus *dashes in with thoughts* *realizes everyone else has already voiced her thoughts* *is slightly at loss for what to do* 😜

Only two things really stood out to me…
1. As Kate said, mentioning Jerrold in that fashion makes him sound more important to the plot than actually was. I mean, he was a TON important to Trev’s character arc and the…[Read more]

@xonos-darkgrate Google it. Almost all word softwares have a word count feature.

@Emily Neato! I know everyone’s kinda already said it but wowza that sunset. 😍 And the lighthouse is adorable. *really wants to climb it* 😜

@raevynstar Confidence is key. A good spoiled brat sees the world in black and white. Their confidence in themselves is unflinching and they don’t consider other ways of looking at things. Such firmness inspires respect, even in fools.

Don’t know if that fits your character, but it’s one thing that works really well.

*scowls at technology in general* Sorry guys… if any of you have followed the link and been horribly confused, I tried to fix something backstage because one of my pages was acting up and I think I just made it worse. I’ll try to get it back up and organized as soon as possible.

@rolena-hatfield wellll… *glances around cautiously*
Okay, yes. Apparently my secret is out. I do have a blog. I’ve had it for a while; I just haven’t been able to be active on it yet. I went ahead and set it up for graphic design purposes, but I’m waiting to finish up the very lastest of my last extracurricular school projects before I start…[Read more]

@catwing Thanks! These are so fun to make!
@salome01w4g Wow, nice!
@shannon Not horrible at all! 🙂 Love it!

@jess-penrose We call them both.

@josiahdeboer You don’t need to have read the book. Just tell me your gut feelings. Most people, after all, do read a synopsis before they read the book.

@everybody Thanks for the feedback! I suppose I’ll tweak some of the wording then get back to you.

@dragon-snapper Both, of course. 🙂

@xonos-darkgrate There are some plot twists, yes, but the story doesn’t stand on its unusual premise. It stands much more on its psychological depth. And, certainly! Go ahead and reword it.

@emily Anything…[Read more]

@Dragon-Snapper *scowls* We are not taking over the kingdom.