Hannah Olsen

A story of action, adventure, and justice, written in a classical style.

@Daeus @His-Instrument me no likey. There’s no emotional hook.

@Winter-Rose awesome! Survival is always a good thing… ;P

@graciegirl Thanks for sharing! I’m glad this thread has encouraged you. 😀 😀 I love those verses! In Bible Bee this summer Hebrews 3 and 4 were some of the chapters/passages we studied (btw I qualified!!!) and so I recognized some of them. 😀

@his-instrument I think attracting classical lovers is worth losing non classical lovers.

@his-instrument Thank. Those are great suggestions.

I do, though, need to have that one liner right at the beginning. The idea is that people have a three-second attention span. They won’t read the whole synopsis unless their attention is instantly piqued. Let me see if I can make the wording work.

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@kate-flournoy Yes, that’s certainly possible. When I read the new first line along with my old synopsis however, it didn’t seem to flow well. Perhaps that’s just me though. The reason I redid the general synopsis was because I wanted the first line of that paragraph to fit with the first line above it. Things kept changing from there.

@Daeus I actually really, really, really prefer the first synopsis… *rueful smile*
When you say ‘make it clearer who it’s for’ are you talking about the target audience? If that’s the case, a more explicit (but still subtle) ‘mission statement’ might be all that’s required. Not knowing precisely what the underlying issue is, I would say is it…[Read more]

@Jessi-Rae yup. She’s sixteen, I’m eighteen. Though everybody thinks she’s older so… *shrugs**grins*

@Jesi-Rae yup. She’s sixteen, I’m eighteen. Though everybody thinks she’s older so… *shrugs**grins*

@Emma-Flournoy *smirks* You’ve been waiting your entire life to be able to say that, haven’t you? XD

@Jessi-Rae oh just pretty normal rhymey stuff. 😉 I like the poems that tell stories… or the ones that are almost like ballads. 😉 Not as good as I’d like to be, but I’ll keep practicing.

Welcome to the Kingdom @aislinn-mollisong! Can I ask, is that your real name? It sounds just fantasy-ish enough to make me wonder… *wink*
Yep, Rolena is the best.
What’s your favorite thing about writing?

Hi, @aislinn-mollisong. Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet.

What’s the premise of your trilogy?

Welcome to the forum @aislinn-mollisong Oh, a fantasy trilogy sounds both fun and a lot of work. I’m so glad you are here! That’s so cool you know @rolena-hatfield she’s the best 🙂 One of my musical theater buddies 🙂

Anyway welcome to probably the craziest, fun-loving, dedicated to writing, and super encouraging place on the internet!!! (It’s…[Read more]

@LifeofKatie @Kate-Flournoy YESSSSS, I’VE ALWAYS WANTED A TWIN!! 😛
Zikers, seriously though, that’s so funny. Great minds…have similar taste in profile pics…? XD

And Katie, you’re ENFP? Awesoommmeeee.

@that_writer_girl_99 @winter-rose Oh, yes. Praying for you guys. <3