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BlueJay replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
“Oh,” I said. I hadn’t meant to hurt him. “Well, we can be good friends now, right?”
He nods and looks at me.
“Um, anything else I should know?” My head was hurting and I rub my temples.
“Oh boy,” said Gavin. “You really have forgotten everything. Perhaps I had better come in and explain it to you so you understand what is going on.”
“Sure,” I…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
“Oh,” I said. I hadn’t meant to hurt him. “Well, we can be good friends now, right?”
He nods and looks at me.
“Um, anything else I should know?” My head was hurting and I rub my temples.
“Oh boy,” said Gavin. “You really have forgotten everything. Perhaps I had better come in and explain it to you so you understand what is going on.”
“Sure,” I…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 2 months ago
@overcomer I like this one definitely out of your lot of titles. “Marks of a Typewriter.” But “Dust and Ink” is good too. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 2 months ago
@overcomer I like this one definitely out your lot of titles. Marks of a Typewriter. But Dust and Ink is good too. 🙂
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Greta posted an update 10 years, 2 months ago
Jesus, Jesus,
You saved me from death.
Why? Why me?
I’m sinful.
I’m broken.
I’m awful.
I make the wrong choices.
There is no good in me.
But still you love me!
But still you pursue me!
You took the cross,
You carried it for the world.
You were tortured,
Humiliated,
For the world,
For me.
Then you rose,
Victorious,
From the grave,
You came alive…[Read more] -
Greta posted an update 10 years, 2 months ago
@everyone, Happy Good Friday! I mean, it’s not really happy, but anyway…
I’m watching the Passion of the Christ tonight to remind myself that today is more than just another day. -
Greta replied to the topic How to Create Good Conflict in the forum Plotting 10 years, 2 months ago
The conflict is in reaching the goal, not the goal itself.
@kate-flournoy, yeah, that’s what I was trying to say, but you said it better. 😉 😛
Yes, character conflict is quite interesting. In the novel I’m working on with my sister (@ingridrd), we use some of that (MC and a snobby girl [aka Sheryn Slade] are always at each other’s throats).…[Read more] -
Greta replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
“This is really weird, introducing myself to you. Okay,” he sucks in a deep breath. “I’m Gavin Frensky.”
Gavin Frensky. The name sounds familiar…like someone I dreamed about but whom I didn’t know personally. I stare at Gavin, unable to tear my gaze away. “How old are you, Gavin?”
“I’m 17.”
Seventeen. For some reason, seventeen doesn’t seem…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Question About Submissions and Sharing in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
:O Sarah!!! So this is the kind of friend that I’m emailing with?!? *Faints* 😛
@overcomer I do love the beach. You make me wish for summer all again. We are into our first month of autumn and heading for winter. 🙁 (And my birthday 🙂 )
@kate-flournoy A wise move. I shall endeavour to do the same. -
BlueJay replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 2 months ago
Written Words.
Ha, I thought of another one. Yay! (Don’t know if it’s any good though.) -
BlueJay replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 2 months ago
@overcomer Ooooo….great poem. I really loved it.
Hmm…titles. Not my strong point.
The typewriter.
Words.
“Come on Tess. Think, think.” *scrunches up eyes and holds breath* Gasp, gasp, gasp. “Nope, that’s all I can think of for now.” 🙁 Sorry -
Greta replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
Let me try that again… for some reason I switched to past tense.
“Who are you?” I manage to ask him.
“Someone who knows why you’re here,” the man answers.
I can’t stop staring at the man. There’s something unusual about him that I can’t put my finger on… -
Greta replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
“Who are you?” I managed to ask him.
“Someone who knows why you’re here,” the man answered.
I couldn’t stop staring at the man. There was something unusual about him that I couldn’t put my finger on… -
Greta replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
“Who are you?” I managed to ask him.
“Someone who knows why you’re here,” the man answered.
I couldn’t stop staring at the man. There was something unusual about that I couldn’t put my finger on… -
BlueJay replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
“Well…um…maybe someone else would like to say something?” I asked, trying hard to move the spotlight off me.
The faces stared back at me blankly.
“Fine,” I said. “Tell me the problem, and I’ll see what I can do.”
“You should know what the problem is,” one little old lady screeched at me.
“She can’t remember,” another argued.
Suddenly the…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
“Well…um…maybe someone else would like to say something?” I asked, trying hard to move the spotlight off me.
The faces stared back at my blankly.
“Fine,” I said. “Tell the problem, and I’ll see what I can do.”
“You should know what the problem is,” one little old lady screeched at me.
“She can’t remember,” another argued.
Suddenly the whole…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
“Well…um…maybe someone else would like to say something?” I asked, trying hard to move the spotlight of me.
The faces stared back at my blankly.
“Fine,” I said. “Tell the problem, and I’ll see what I can do.”
“You should know what the problem is,” one little old lady screeched at me.
“She can’t remember,” another argued.
Suddenly the whole…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
@warrioroftherealm Welcome to the topic. Idaho! That’s great. 😀
@daeus I envy you. I’ve always wanted to look like a movie star!!!!!!! -
Greta started the topic How to Create Good Conflict in the forum 10 years, 2 months ago
Hello, everyone!
The other day, I was reading in this novel book I own that good conflict is made up of M + G + O. In other words, the MC + his/her Goal + the Opposition to that goal = Conflict. I thought this might be an interesting topic to discuss with you all. So what are your thoughts about this? And how do you create good conflict in your novels?
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Greta replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
…”Uh,” I pause, trying to remember any “ideas” I might have had before I passed out. The funny thing is, I’ve never met these people before in my life. How could they possibly know who I am?
The red-headed man glares at me again and waits expectantly for me to speak. When I say nothing, he growls, “Tell us about your idea to save the world.…[Read more] - Load More

Whoa! Greta, that’s a great poem. I really like it. 😀
Thanks so much, Tessa! 🙂
Wow, that is cool XDXD
Thank you. 😀
That’s beautiful, Greta! Thanks for sharing it with us. 🙂
Awww, thank you, Sarah! 🙂 🙂 🙂