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Active 5 years, 10 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Author's Attic in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@rolena-hatfield wellll… *glances around cautiously*
Okay, yes. Apparently my secret is out. I do have a blog. I’ve had it for a while; I just haven’t been able to be active on it yet. I went ahead and set it up for graphic design purposes, but I’m waiting to finish up the very lastest of my last extracurricular school projects before I start…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Is My Main Character Well-Developed? in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
@raevynstar Oh…yeah….that would make a Labrador a problem. 😛
@daeus *dances* Yay! Destruction to telling!
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Snapper replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus
Well, big thoughts is mainly that you should take out the last paragraph, because although you’re trying to appeal with struggles like that, people might not want to think of themselves as weak or cowardly, if you know what I mean. Maybe they know that subconsciously, but who wants to admit that they are a coward? I mean, a Christian might…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Hi fellow KaPeeFers!!! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@jess-penrose XD Yeah, that’s my thoughts. 😀 You might have noticed I have very strong opinions on these things. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper *scowls* We are not taking over the kingdom.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@xonos-darkgrate as someone who has read and reread this story, I can assure you it’s anything but simple. In many ways it’s a lot like most classical literature— the premise it’s built on is very basic, almost simple, and yet when you read the story it’s nothing you ever would have guessed.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Author's Attic in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@rolena-hatfield I love your blog! Your Attic looks so nice!
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Snapper replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy He forgot to tag me too. Can we take over the kingdom now? How bout now? Now?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus *sniffs* You forgot to tag me.
But looks like I’m first to the party anyway, so here goes. XDFirst off, I really like it. The only suggestions I have are a few tweaks to the wording.
The first line, I think, would be better as simply ‘Trevor is in a mess. After traveling back in time, he and his sister are now…’ etc. It leaves out…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 will continue. 😉
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Snapper replied to the topic Hi fellow KaPeeFers!!! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@aratrea XD Perfect.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@raevynstar *nods* Totally valid reason. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Author's Attic in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@Rolena-Hatfield that’s awesome! I like the color scheme. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@raevynstar heyyyyyy! I’m an INFP too. 😀 Welcome to KP; so glad to have you here. I’m a poet (of sorts 😛 ) as well. Why do you like poetry?
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Snapper replied to the topic Salutations, writers. I'm Xonos Darkgrate. in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@xonos-darkgrate Welcome to the dark side, Xonos. We have ice cream.
XD
Well, you might’ve guess that this isn’t the dark side. We have too many elves and unicorns for that. But anyway, welcome! Glad to have you!
Cool name, BTW.
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Snapper replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@salome01w4g *waddles along, whistling somewhat innocently*
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Snapper replied to the topic Is My Main Character Well-Developed? in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
Oh, and if he has PTSD does he get to have a Labrador follow him everywhere? 😀 😉
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Snapper replied to the topic Is My Main Character Well-Developed? in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
@raevynstar Ooh! He does sound like a great character. For someone who controls fire, he doesn’t sound like very much of a fighter, which I think is great, because when someone thinks fire, they think of a fighter. Nice and unique, that one. *thumbs up*
If you want to improve him, I’d discover some of his quirks. What does he do when he’s…[Read more] - Load More
