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@hybridlore

Thanks!

No, this one spawned an entirely new setting. I just can’t help it!

@highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @theducktator @loopylin @grcr

Thanks for the feedback! So far, it looks like the popularity ranking is:

1. Chromancy
2. Spectrachromy
3. Prismathurgy
4. Spectrathurgy
5. Spectralurgy

With the other three having no votes. I’ll take this into consideration.

As some have guessed, this is a color-based magic system.…[Read more]

@jonas

I like Spectrachromy… and Chromancy…

Prismathurgy is alright… but I’m not head over heels about it…

I don’t really like the other five… 😁

@jonas

I think I like Spectrachromy/lurgy the best. I also like Chromamancy.

@the_lost-journal

Sorry I’m late in getting back to you.

Yeah, that was a creepy story. I don’t have too much to say about it—I agree with Linus about the pacing. I, too, like your use of repetition here. 😊

in my reached up to my ears, to feel them blood… leaking out of them…

I think I get what you’re saying here, but I had a bit of a hard time…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

thx.

I did have a scene before this one, but I didn’t deem it ready for posting, since there are a few things I want to smooth out first. Hopefully that scene will make it flow better.

@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @whalekeeper @keilah-h

Sorry for not posting in eight days. I hit Writer’s Block while trying to edit the next story to go on here and writing the next one 🙁

I’m not sure how long until I can post the full thing, but until then, I’m gonna post a snippet of the next…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Super creepy, but interesting! Is this the entirety of the story, or is there going to be more? Either way, the mystery remains effective: if there’s more, than this is effective for piquing the reader’s interesting; if not, the questions it leaves unanswered are intriguing in and of themselves. I also liked your use of repetition.

@theducktator

So, question. Is there an RP on here that I could randomly stuff some characters into, or is now not a good time?

Well, as @hybridlore alluded to, there is the character adventure RP. You would be totally welcome to join, although the it has been pretty much inactive recently. (Also, in case it would affect you, we do have a c…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Oh…

I just feel bad :/

I don’t like it when I hurt people’s feelings  😥

@keilah-h

yeahhhh lol

I just asked ChatGPT to write a cringy story for me lolll

🔥🔥 THE LEGEND OF SIR BURGERFACE 2: REVENGE OF THE EVIL BROCCOLI KING’S COUSIN’S PET GOLDFISH 🔥🔥
Once upon a time, in the SUPER AWESOME kingdom of Snacktopia, Sir Burgerface was CHILLING on his golden throne made of curly fries, sipping a milkshake of power. Everybody loved him because he…

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@the_lost-journal

…?

oh…

😓

I’m so confused…did I say something wrong? I was just saying that I like your name!!

I’m sorry if something I said hurt your feelings… :/

@keilah-h

also I’m still laughing about “bRiNg a MeLoN” lollll

It’s my favorite thing ever hahaha

@keilah-h

yessss I get like this too, I decide a scene is cringey, but I like it too much to remove it.

YES YES YES YES YESSSSSS

that’s the most relatable thing I’ve heard XDXD

What are they gonna do to Sef’s little sis?

Well…its kinda a long story and it’s gonna give away a lot (I also need to flesh out the plot wayyy more)

When I have all m…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

However, I have also gotten far enough to determine something else. Due to some things such as the romance, I don’t think am in the target audience for your story. I am no longer going to read this. This does not mean your story is bad, it just means that it’s not for me and I think others will be able to give you better fee…

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