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@trailblazer

Ofc! I love stories with that kind of friendship…makes me miss my best friend, lol.

@esther-c @acancello @trailblazer @grcr @rae @mineralizedwritings

Ottoline

“Ottoline! Where are you?” Hugo’s voice echoed down the stairwell. His voice contained some sort of urgency. “Ottoline!” She heard his footsteps coming down the stairs. “There you are,” he sighed when he saw her and smiled his crooked smile that never failed to make…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

👀

@thearcaneaxiom

Don’t worry—we all have real names too! (At least, I would think so 👀)

@trailblazer

“I don’t want to lose you.” I was surprised to see tears welling in Etta’s eyes.

Aww, I love their friendship! This almost made me cry XD

I agree with Hybridlore, I don’t think the summary-type writing is a bad thing. It fits great with this story!

@esther-c @trailblazer

Yeah, it does end abruptly. I really don’t like this chapter, lol. I guess….more EDITING! SO MUCH FUN!!!! (not.)

@hybridlore

Maybe something like that? I mean, Lilitu already described what happened, sort of, and I feel like it gets a little graphic in the actual flashback part. But it’s really up to you, if you feel l…

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@loopylin

Sorry about the paragraphs, I have gone through and shortened them after people mentioned it. it should be easier to follow now.

Um…really whatever strikes you as needs changing. I often get comments from my friends like “It’s good.” “I really like it.” et cetera et cetera. Honestly, I get tired of hearing that, so if you got some…[Read more]

@loopylin

Aww, thanks!! 😊

You should! 😃 I’d love to see them if you do!!

Here is Blair’s board… He is the first of the five MCs I introduce in my WIP.

I might redo it cuz he is not all “white and innocent”…

@freedomwriter76

oo! I like that one!

(Here’s something funny, my sister has a character named Leon lol)

why are all my charries so saddddd 😭

(lol 😅 I feel that way sometimes too)

@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore

New drawings of the swords. ^^^