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Ellis

That was far enough. Ellis drew his own sword, which burned green.

“Nahim, put. The sword. Away. This is for your own good.”

@highscribeofaetherium

Note on dialogue grammar:

“Probably.” Zahlin said, drawing the blade. “Nahim, put that sword down now. I’m not asking twice.”

You want a comma after ‘probably’: “Probably,” Zahlin said…

The ‘probably’ is connected to ‘Zahlin said.’ You do want a period after ‘Zahlin said, drawing the blade.’ like you put. Just a habit y…[Read more]

Nahim

“I fight for everything because I’ve almost died so many times.” Zahlin spoke up about Nahim taking his hand off his sword. That was it. Green molten crystal shot from the handle as Nahim drew his sword. “Zahlin, stay out of this. Peace of Honor.”

@JONAS

JOIN THE #MAKENAHIMTAKEABREAK SOCIETY DO NOT RESIST.

Zahlin

Maybe we should do something…? The Sword suggested.

“Probably.” Zahlin said, drawing the blade. “Nahim, put that sword down now. I’m not asking twice.”

Ellis

“That doesn’t seem like a very good life approach. Is that why you’ve almost died so many times?”

Nahim

“I fight for everything.”

@beth-torres

Oh cool! What’s your favorite invasive species? (Sorry, always wanted to ask that.)

Ellis

“No!” snapped Ellis. “It’s ridiculous that you want to fight over this!”

Nahim

“I agree, your idea is ridiculous.”

@JONAS

JOIN USSSSSSSS…

@beth-torres

Do you live in Florida?

Ellis

Nahim’s hand went to his sword.

“Nahim, this is ridiculous!” shouted Ellis.

@jonas

Why am I enjoying this!!!!!!

Nahim

Wow, Ellis was serious. Nahim’s hand rested on his crystal sword, this wouldn’t end without a fight.

@jonas

I AGREE WITH @HIGHSCRIBEOFAETHERIUM!

Ellis

Ellis sighed. “Someone, get a rope!”

Oh and Nora is all for her fian resting!

@JONAS

JOIN THE #MAKENAHIMTAKEABREAK SOCIETY!

Nahim

Nahim’s vision blurred. Yeah, he knew he needed to rest, but he was a Nayhelm, and Nayhelm are stubborn. Stubborn to death.

“I’d like to see you try to tie me up. I consider killing someone easier than that, and Zahlin couldn’t kill me.”

@jonas

Zahlin may decide it would be a good idea to join in XD