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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
But she doesn’t need to go to the practice of course. I could add some new characters and maybe they could meet in the school halls, if you want. Or she could meet @highscribeofaetherim ‘s character, whoever that will be.
I also might add a second character, although I’m not sure who it would be. I haven’t RPd as Vlydia before, but I’m…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Paper isn’t allowed, but non-gun weapons are.
Well, at my Dad’s work, menthols aren’t allowed places, yet he always has a razor knife in his pocket.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Vlydia probably would be carrying pens, papers, and books, which gives her more reason to not want to go.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Lol. That’s an odd assortment of contrabands. Paper isn’t allowed, but non-gun weapons are.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I think Gregory would definiately interrogate Junior, since Junior has an unregistered pet and boots already! This could get interesting!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I wish to join this thing as well!!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I don’t think Vlydia would be carrying any contraband. She doesn’t carry any weapons, because she can generate crystals as weapons from her arms. She probably wouldn’t attend that class anyway, because she would already know how. If none of the characters are doing anything outside of that, I can wait, or just throw her in there anyway. Thanks!
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Ruth replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
My thoughts are the same as Jonas, but a horse “pen” is correctly called a stall. If the horse is in a field outside, or a fenced in area, it’s called a paddock. If you need horsey terms, just tag me.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Okay, I’ll also go ahead and say that Dimension and Conversion are also not my favorite powers, so it’s also possible I will change them. I can’t think of anything very interesting to do with the Resonance of Arcane Manipulation, so the result was Conversion. I’m not planning on having any of the Arcane powers being particularly important to the…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I know I said I was done with this magic system. But there was one power I didn’t really like: Age. I have now replaced it. Introducing the Resonance of Destiny.
Destiny: The Resonance of Temporal Manipulation
Destiny is the Resonance of Temporal Manipulation. It allows the user to explore alternate pasts and futures, focused on one object.…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Ok! Thanks!!
yyyyetttt…. though it’s confusing, I may or may not change it… idk…
There are lots of characters with similar names in this story, and—since there are lots of siblings—it’s kinda how I group the characters family-wise… and, yeah, though Blaine and Blair aren’t related, I kinda tie them together in my min…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@everyone
Okay, I’m going to introduce my character now, but I’ll wait to RP till I get a bit of a debriefing about what is happening.
Vlydiana Hsrinar
(Pronounced Vlid-ee-on-a Hsree-nar. The Hrinien people are very fond of mashing consonants together, as you can see. Luckily for everyone else’s characters, she goes by Vlydia (like the name…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
I found it very interesting. I knew that man was the king literally the moment he appeared. Maybe I’m just good at that sort of guessing, because I don’t think it was super obvious, but just so you’re aware. I’m assuming you don’t want most readers to realize that right away? You might want to somehow make it a little less obv…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Thanks!!
😅 Oof, yeah… I had named them before I came up with the book, and it wasn’t supposed to be confusing…
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Ruth replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Peter gave a look of confusion which Pietro replied with a narrowing of his eyes. “They’re my chocolates.”
“Pietro.” Hannah gave the “look” that Pietro had known forever. “Let the kid have a chocolate.”
“These are rare Sokoivan chocolates, do you know how hard they are to find?”
“They’re hersheys just written in Sokovian,” Wanda argue…
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Ruth replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Is it more like the word “real”, but with the ‘l’ cut off and “eln” stuck on?
yes, I believe you could say that.
I’m probably always going to read it in my head as “realm” with an n (nothing sounds wrong about that to me) just cause that’s how it looks.
That makes sense. It just sounds wrong to me because my most successful way of m…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I think I get it. I’m probably always going to read it in my head as “realm” with an n (nothing sounds wrong about that to me) just cause that’s how it looks. So it’s basically just that there’s a bit of separation between the vowels in the middle? Or do you actually pronounce a sharp “EE” sound in there? Is it more like the word “real”, but…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I can’t think of anything right now, (although I do still have to introduce my new character), but I might later. If someone else wants to, go ahead.
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Ruth replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Thank you for your thoughts.
I don’t really understand pronunciations that well, I know how it should sound in English, and I know how it should sound in Realn (for in reality, all the pronunciations are off, since the Realn language often adds sounds to words that are not represented in the word itself.) mainly because of accents and…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @beth-torres
someone else rp, I don’t really have anything. This is our last rp:
Gunslinger
As the bits of bomb inside the bubble broke apart a centimeter a minute, Gunslinger turned around, flipping a switch on his gun and shooting over several heads to blast a hole in the opposite wall.
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