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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Whatever you do, do NOT go with option one! I started writing Guardain Angels before I even knew what plot was, and I am paying for it now! The lack of plot in the first draft means my story bounces all over the place, and trying to tame that and weave my plot has created such troubles that I highly do not reccomend writing a story with no i…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay…so I’ve been worried about my story becoming too graphic…and I was wondering what you thought of it.
The parts I’m concerned about aren’t until the second part…which is a while away from the first chapter…so if you wanted to jump to those ones (or just give me your thoughts on the other ones) that would be…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Oof…yeah, I feel that. Plotting can be really hard! I’ve definitely struggled with that A LOT in the past.
The sad truth is…there’s really no “perfect formula” to make a gripping plot.
What I have done, is followed the advice of Abbie Emmons (on YouTube) and gave my story a theme, the truth I want to show in my story. In my story,…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh! Marvel quotes! We should do some! @freedomwriter76
LOKI: “I left him right here!”
THOR: “Right here on the sidewalk, or right here where that building is being demolished?”
LOKi: “I’ve been falling for thirty minutes!”
-Thor Ragnarok
THOR: “This tastes good.” *breaks coffee mug on floor* “I want more!”
–Thor
SAM: “A sorcerer is…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
“A Republic, ma’am, if you can keep it.” – my fav Benjamin Franklin quote, said after asked what type of government America would have.
Me: “Imagine a place where the horses never hurt themselves.”
Friend I work with at stable: “That’d be pretty cool.”
Horses-cute little brats who run off with you on autumn trailrides. Somehow still lovable,…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Whatever you do, do NOT go with option one! I started writing Guardain Angels before I even knew what plot was, and I am paying for it now! The lack of plot in the first draft means my story bounces all over the place, and trying to tame that and weave my plot has created such troubles that I highly do not reccomend writing a story with n…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @rae @grcr
Okay, I’ve run into an issue that I should have realized was an issue earlier.
So, when I decided to work on this instead of the Adonial Saga, I thought, ‘I’ve got a fully developed magic system, an interesting and fairly complete setting, I’ve got some charact…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Guys….Sef isn’t really gonna say anything unless people talk to her because she’s on the verge of a panic attack…so that’s why my RP’s are kind of short XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Sef
Sef closed her eyes, tears threatening to leak out from behind her lids as she clasped her hands to hide their trembling.
She wanted to go home.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Lol I love Puddleglum so much XD
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
“Knowledge is power. France is bacon.”
– A misquote
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Saoirse
Saoirse watched his movements carefully with a keen eye as he demonstrated.
“You hand, mi’ Warrioress, if you are ready.” He said when he was done, holding out his hand. Saoirse paused momentarily, rethinking all her life choices that had somehow got her here, before taking it.
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That was pretty short, but I’m half-dead from ka…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
“Any sufficiently explained magic system is equivalent to science.” – Jonas (yes, I’m very wise. We can all ignore that this is a not-so clever adaptation of someone else’s saying, as well as the fact that I’ve never said this aloud.)
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Nahim Jr.
Nahim Jr bowed his head once more.
“Then I shall demonstrate, mi’ Warrioress.” Stepping back, Jr began by whistling a sweet tune, slowly at first, and walking behind his imaginationary partner. Sliding his hand around her invisible waist, still whistling slowly, he led her away a few paces, before picking up the…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
A little serious…
“The Civil War never truly ended.” – Shelps
This is one of my favorite quotes, not just because of who said it (you would not know who “Shelps” is, but if you did, you’d believe those words as much as I) But because it is so true.
“A hero is the one who bleeds.”
“It’s as a vow and it’s as a rule, that the world must be…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
To start us off:
“If you can’t control your peanut butter, you can’t expect to be able to control your life either.” – Calvin, Calvin and Hobbes
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
This is a place to share any wise/inspirational/funny/dumb quotes spoken by anyone, about anything. You can even quote yourself, or other people you know. (Although you should probably have that person’s permission first.)
Tags: @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @rae @thearcaneaxiom @acancello @freedomwriter76 @grcr @hybridlore @beth-torr…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Affirmative.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @rae
Looking back, it looks like Sara is up next, then me, then Rae. Correct?
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