@hanako
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Full Novella(!): Oathbroken in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Full Novella(!): Oathbroken in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Thank you! Yeah, I don’t think I have shared any actual writing. A lot of world building stuff, but no actual writing. (Oh, yeah, except that short story a while ago. Not sure if you read that one.)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hi… I’m back! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 4 months ago
@thelooneyone
Oop, I guess I didn’t see the intro part!
I’m Sara (if you hadn’t gathered that already, lol) and I joined back in September!!!!!
I’m blanking on what else to write about me….so you can always stalk my profile to read about me XD
h and for anyone new that I haven’t already talked to, an introduction:
Literally why is e…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
ngl i feel really stupid right now for being a writer…a FANTASY writer mind you, and NOT KNOWING WHAT THESE ARE….oh well, a day of cleaning out chicken coops and shoveling ground corn and trying to reason with stubborn steers will do that to a person
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
english please???? lol sorry my brain is super tired and i tried googling what the heck those types of fantasies are but i’m so tired i can hardly read the words…
can someone please help meeeee XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Full Novella(!): Oathbroken in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
WOW. I am only like 2 paragraphs in but I got goosebumps….
I feel like I’ve never read your writing before except for RP’s, and OH MY GOODNESS it’s amazing!
Just wow.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
omc i love that sooo much!!! especially since i relate to hallie a LOT.
*grabs cookie and runs*
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
So true XD
Alpha
“Listen, firstly, I don’t think your dumb. You’re actually pretty bright, compared to my youngest brother. Secondly,” Alpha’s face grew grave and serious. “There are none left who can be the hero. You’ve never seen him, never heard about him, and thank Ehyeh for that. I’m talking about a being so…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Alpha
“One second, Gangster. Hugo, don’t bother about it, and whatever you do, don’t apologize. I let you stab me, so I’m to blaim. Go ahead, little guy, I’m in a good mood.”
Man, as soon as Sebster Gangster gets involved, Alpha is like “okay, I like you”. Every single time that little blond gets involved Alpha just calms…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Yes, actually, I’m in Challenge I going into II.
Sure the songs are helpful for some, but I personally find them not too helpful.
Latin is just not my subject. Expo though…
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Alpha
They’re actually upset. Well…I should at least try to be nice. “Uh, thank you for this back. Oh, and I guess I should say thank you that Nar isn’t bothering me right now. She’s so angry at me that she totally forgot I got hurt. Um…” Alpha shrugged, turning away.
Idk how to go on.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Not sure what Arthurian Fantasy entails, but I’ll go:
- high fantasy
- steampunk
- arthurian fantasy
- urban fantasy
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HighScribe replied to the topic Full Novella(!): Oathbroken in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
👏👏
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Full Novella(!): Oathbroken in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Oh, wait, I forgot about this tactic:
Google doc: h ttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1w_TDIfhF5atyi6gn4zhh3rudnxWtULjnj06LWehEO0g/edit?usp=sharing (delete the space after the ‘h.’)
Take that, Wyoh!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Full Novella(!): Oathbroken in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Are you kidding me, Wyoh, that’s the THIRD time you’ve eaten that link!
Um, let’s see. I’ll try posting it under my status update.
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Full Novella(!): Oathbroken in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
(Reposting, because the original was long to the infinite abyss of moderation.)
This is a novella that I wrote over the last eight weeks for my creative writing class. I am quite pleased with how it came out. If anyone would like to give me feedback, or just read it for fun, here is the link (in reply.) Feel free to give me a chapter-by-chapter…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery posted an update 2 years, 4 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @rae @thearcaneaxiom @theducktator @grcr @anyone
Hello, KP! I am (probably) going to be more active, as I have finished all my online classes, as well as blackbelt testing, and piano lessons. Despite not posting much, I haven’t been *completely* out of touch with the KP world. I know some new people have…[Read more] -
Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I know we don’t even have a setting yet, but I’m gonna offer up my two couples (Got a name for Callum’s girlfriend)
Silfair
Silvanis Falkon+Fairy Ward
(Note: Silvanis Snickerdoodle finally discovered what a snickerdoodle is, so he dropped the name XD)
Silvanis is the son of Alpha and Silkana Grath. He has black hair that’s slicked back on…[Read more]
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*facepalm* so much for being dramatic. The post is ‘pending moderation’, because I put a link in it. From past experience, that takes a long time (approximately forever), so I’ll have to redo that.
Good to see you again! I haven’t been too active either, more just on and off. KP finally published my short story as well, so that’s cool. I’ll check out the Novella! That’s awesome that you’ve done that!
That’s something I should do honestly, I’ve been banging my head on the wall over writing whole books, that I haven’t considered starting with…[Read more]
Yeah, I found that writing is a lot easier when you have *no other choice.* Since I was expected to submit an outline, and expected to submit a chapter every week, I actually did do those things!
Yeah, that’s what happened when I wrote my short story. There was a due date for a competition I was entering it for, so that accountability really forced me to Just Do It!
What’s frustrating is trying to have that same accountability on yourself. Even if you set dates, it doesn’t feel the same, so there’s gotta be good ways to convince yourself…[Read more]
Maybe we could organize something similar for KP, where everyone submits a chapter a week. But then again, maybe that wouldn’t be enough. It would probably be pretty easy to tell everyone that you didn’t have enough time, and then get behind and completely forget about it.
That’s true, but holding each other accountable is a great method. Me and my sister could start trying to do that. We pester each other about writing all the time, but it may actually help to set it up as chapter submission to one another, or something like that.
Wow, dramatic.
One question: WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH JONAS?
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Jonas is never this dramatic!
Hey! It’s nice to hear from you again! 😄
Reading your novella rn…
BRUH UR ALIVE !!!!!
I’m going to get to your novella sometime…I’m kinda busy right now (it feels like I always say that now….ugh!) but I will!
Oooh, I’ll have to check out your novella!