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@rae

Okay. I’ve never heard of those before.

@jonas

If a zip is a real thing, I don’t know about it. A zip is like a type of speeder, but only meant for one person. Most speeders in my writing are built for two or more.

@rae

That makes sense. I do think it would be better to either have more sci-fi elements or not mention them at all. As it is, it’s just enough to be confusing. I would imagine that if you did write this into a novella, it would fix the problem, since you would have more time for it to become clear.

Is a zip a real thing or is it an instance o…[Read more]

@rae

Ok 👍 makes sense. Yeah, I didn’t take it to mean you actually believed in extraterrestrial life.

@highscribeofaetherium @jonas

It is set in my sci-fi galaxy, which in that world is the same as our universe, but at the same time, I don’t believe in life on that planets or in other galaxies. Sorry, it’s confusing, but once you figure it out, it makes sense.

The reason I didn’t go into much of the sci-fi stuff is for one, I don’t lime to focus…[Read more]

@linu-smallprint

I actually finished mine already… do you want me to share it now, or should I wait until a little later…?

@linus-smallprint

Yeah… 😅 More on the five side, but twelve because a few of them have siblings who are main.

1. Summarize your project in a paragraph or two! Like on the back of a book.
I’ve never been able to do book blurbs well, but I’ll try…
 
A war upon the outside and a war upon the inside.
The Nanian war has taken away almost everything from Nahim Nayhelm; his family, his home, and his faith. While seeking revenge upon the two figures he blames…[Read more]

@rae

So, Estelle has a Bible, but this seems to take place in the same universe as all/most of your stories. So is your sci-fi universe supposed to be the same as our universe?

@rae

I really like it, you did a really nice job!

Although I would bring up the same thing as Jonas, about the setting and stuff.

@rae

Very nice, and I think it would work very well as a novella! The only thing I’m confused about is that it apparently takes place in a sci-fi world (since you mentioned other planets), but the setting seemed to be normal.

@theducktator

I love your forum signature! 😂😂

@rae

That… that really was beautiful! ❤️❤️❤️ Brought me to tears.

I think it’s really good and I like it how it is, but a novella wouldn’t be bad either!

I apologize if I missed any italicized words.

Okkkayyy… here are the answers for my current novel The Purple Eyed…

1. Summarize your project in a paragraph or two! Like on the back of a book.

Warriors are born in unexpected and ordinary places. They come to know what it is that they believe, and they live boldly for it, seeking to improve the lives of mankind while defending their c…

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@keilah-h

but don’t worry, it’s just molting, it’ll grow a new shell soon.

*chokes on coffee*
Bwahahahahaha that’s hilarious 🤣🤣🤣😂😅😂😆😂😂🤣😆😆😆😆😆🤣