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@esther-c

I also hope I didn’t come across as rude or brushing you off…I really do appreciate your thoughts because that means I need to work on foreshadowing! And explaining my book to others helps me flesh out my thoughts a little more! Thank you so much! <3

@esther-c

Ok, so the biggest thing I noticed was the lack of hope throughout the story. The characters seemed to think about death a lot and were put through a lot of physical pain. There’s nothing inherently wrong with that, but it needs to be balanced out with hope. When I got to read those Lilitu/Sef memories from when they were little, that w…

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@esther-c

“I am, I’m just trying to be mature about it.” He gave her a playful wink and squeezed her hand.

Maybe if she studied his face long enough she’d find something to not like.

“Says the kid who gave every girl in his fourth grade class a valentine.”

LOL I love these parts. 💛💛

Also I have two questions… don’t listen to me if you don’t…[Read more]

@rae

*sob*

There’s a small kingdom settled on the jagged crown of a snow covered mountain—a kingdom named Modorid by the people who founded it some thousand years ago. It was the only settlement for miles and miles, and most have forgotten it’s there. It is inhabited by the Modoish—jovial people with hair as white as the snow that filled their c…

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@raxforge (I changed a few things in the story btw) @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @whalekeeper @hybridlore @theducktator

Story 10!

Only two more stories and then The Baron Chronicles will come to a close. Thx for reading this far! 💜

 
Fire
The blaze in the fireplace crackled. Baron balanced a pencil on his hand, staring down at his rose drawing on…[Read more]

@loopylin

… May I ask what’s in Alpha’s pockets?

Alpha’s gonna be so mad lol

•  A pocket knife (are you surprised lol)
• some loose change
• some random things he picked up like an acorn probably (Strange new world, strange new things, random things in pockets)
• a picture from a couple years back of him and Nar having a flour fight (he lost)

@loopylin

Alpha’s reaction.

I apologize to Dante ahead of time. I like you Dante, but Alpha is not a fan.

Alpha

Before Dante could get far, he was pinned against the wall in the hallway outside their room, Alpha’s finger’s wrapped around his throat. A red vapor was thinly veiling Alpha’s eyes. “Watch yourself, Dante. You may think you know a…[Read more]

@loopylin

173 words

Her wide, innocent eyes were of a bluish purple, flecked with white as if some painter had dabbed their brush in white and flicked it with their finger. Then, some magical fairy had come and made all the spots glow like the stars in the sky. Her skin and hair were of similar shades of the bluish purple. Even her little boots…

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@hybridlore

Okay, I wrote 500 hundred words. I won’t post them here though because they’re part of a story I plan to post soon of The Baron Chronicles topic and I really don’t want to spoil what happens in this story.

@the_lost-journal

(where this super cool person is wearing a mask and then they remove their mask and its a GIRL 😮 nothing against girls being cool, just the trope is over used and I am more surprised when it turns out to be a male rather than a female.)

My least favorite part about this trope is the girl almost always has eyeliner on. Or they’re…[Read more]

@theducktator

Thx!

Who was your favorite?

@ellette-giselle

I’m sorry, I finished drawing Rory a couple days ago but I realized I never took a photo and posted it!

Here he is (I think something’s off about his face 🤔 but I hope it looks like him)

@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @anyone

I don’t know if I’ll have anything going on that day (probably not, though) but if I’m free I’ll come!

Ellette, I think I gave you my email, right?

@hybridlore

😱😱😱

Well, when I’m done doing all the snowballs I’ve accumulated I’ll have 44 to throw so I will have ample revenge.

@loopylin

Woah…

Dante has officially been added to Alpha’s possible threat list….

Like what if he needed stitches?

He’s usually okay with getting stitched, if it’s Nar who’s doing it. As far as anesthesia, he declines.

I might write an rp later, when I decide how to write Alpha without making it too dark

Yayyy, another call! Count me innnn!

@the_lost-journal

correct, the priest isn’t forgiving the sins. It is God.

*is confused* If you know it’s God forgiving the sins, then why do you guys go to confession to a priest at all? Why not just ask God?

I’m sorry if that sounded rude…I don’t mean it that way, I’m just very confused and trying to understand.

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