@hanako
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Hiii! Good to see you again! How’s it going, how’s life?
I didn’t know you write poetry… that’s cool!! 😄
Ooo I want to hear about your new series too! What’s it about?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Ah, yes. Let’s see, where were we?
It looks like Ben, Flare, Baron, Jenna, and Ellis are in one group in the middle of the city, with Felicity having just run off. @raxforge @rae @loopylin
Rina, Klethen, Ilahna, Jirah, Rosemary, and Rapha are on the ship with Fleet, heading out of the city. (I believe Rosemary and Rapha fell off and are…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey posted an update 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Oh dear, I still need to catch up
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Ruee Hamster Huey posted an update 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@jonas
I need help.
So, Andrew (otherwise known as Raxforge) said he would like it if I could play a piano song called Quiet at Dawn by Galen Rise. It’s a beautiful piece, that sounds in my skill range, but I can’t find any sheet music for it (it only has a little over 900 views on YouTube).
I was wondering if you could help me make my own sheet…[Read more]-
Sure! I think it will be doable. I gave it a listen to see what it’s like, and it sounds like it shouldn’t be too difficult. It’s a nice song! I got the first couple lines written without much difficulty, so I should be able to do the whole thing, although I don’t know how long it might take.
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Okay, thank you so much! This means a lot to me.
If you would like my help in any way, plz reach out. If you’d like, I can give you my email.
Thank you again!-
No problem! Honestly, it’ll be good for me to have something to do, since I’m on break until the 21st and will probably get pretty bored. I will be on vacation this week, so I probably won’t get too much done on it until I get back, btw.
Email would probably be a good idea, since I don’t think KP lets you share files (except for images.) Mine is…[Read more]
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I haven’t gotten too much time to work on this, but I’m getting onto a better schedule this week, so I should start making faster progress. I’ll email you the PDF of what I have so far just so you can see it. Let me know if you think there are any mistakes. My ear is not perfect.
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-GRCR- posted an update 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Here is the link to my novel. TPE. Tis not done. Tis liable to change. But anyway. My nine “alright-ish” chapters: https://editor.reedsy.com/s/RPRuZql
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-GRCR- replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
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Aw that makes me so happy that you like it 🥹 Well uh yeah…. I am still writing it… but uh… I’m at a pause right now because my mom is editing it and we’ve taken a pretty long break lol… we plan to start back on it again soon and I’ve been trying to work on it here and there…. But idk.
I can resend you the link but I have…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
YESSSSS!!!
Okay sounds good!!!!! Are you still writing your story? you should resend me the link, I’ve always loved your story! <3
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-GRCR- replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Ah. That is very good news!
also, do still tag me!! I still am reading your story, I just don’t usually have a lot to say though cuz I’m a bad editor. But I am still reading. 😊
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
OH! Ellette, you’re gonna be so happy… ( @theducktator and @grcr might also want to know this)
I have a recent development…
Cass is no longer going to be playing with Sef’s feelings.
He’s officially a nice guy again hahaha
Since Lilitu and Sef are separated for a good chunk of the book, there’s no opportunity for this to happen. Cass is…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@ellette-giselle @anyone-else
Next chapter!!!
What am I doing?
Frustration built up in Lilitu’s chest until he wanted to scream.
But he couldn’t scream….or else Adar would find him.
Cass isn’t going to come bail you out this time, he pressed his lips together in a thin line. You have to figure it out yourself.
He tried to find a comfort…
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I will!!!
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Okay great!!! hahaha!
Really??? That makes me really happy!!!! Thank you!!!! <3
Speaking of Eloy, I just wrote a funny Eloy scene (it’s kind of cheesy I think, but I’m going to edit it later.) I’ll post it in a little bit!!!
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@ellette-giselle @jonas (let me know if I’m tagging you too much, I know you’re probably busy!!!!) this goes for anyone else too, please let me know if you’d like me to stop tagging you lol @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else
Here’s a second half of the Lilitu chapter:
(Again, this is unedited so this won’t be the finished product, this is…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
First of all, I don’t know if you had planned for Lilitu to have any more lasting injuries than some cuts and bruises, but from the level of beating he’s just received, he’s likely to have some cracked or broken ribs (which could damage internal organs), and/or a concussion. And if he was knocked out/unconscious for long…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 5 days ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 6 days ago
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-GRCR- posted an update 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Did you know that frogs can jump 12 times higher than a
house? This is because of the unique structure of their legs and because houses cannot jump.-
Ah!! I love that lol
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HighScribe replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Ok, I read the part, and I think it’s a good introduction to Lilitu. I don’t know if you want critiques, so try I’ll keep it at a minimum.
First of all, I don’t know if you had planned for Lilitu to have any more lasting injuries than some cuts and bruises, but from the level of beating he’s just received, he’s likely to have…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
I’ve never seen it but it looks so cool and that song is beautiful! I’ll have to look into it some more. 🤍
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 6 days ago
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Hey Rae, how are you doing btw? <3 Any story updates?
I’ve been great, what about you?
Story wise, I’m taking a,break with my novel, and more working on an anthology of sorts, telling the story of Baron. So far, I have two stories written, and others partly written.
I’ve also been drawing a lot of my characters recently.
Thanks for checking up on me, I appreciate it.
I’m good too! A little annoyed I have to go back to school, but given the fact I did a little dance when I saw your message back, I think I need socialization.
Yes, take a break! Since you gave me clearance to check on the Guardian Angles doc, you’ve written a LOT and I’m always impressed when someone has that much dexterity. The anthology idea…[Read more]
Lol, yeah, you should get out and see some people!
As far as how much I’ve written with GA, I currently have almost 60k words on my Word Doc where I type things…but I’m going to be cutting out some chapters and rewriting parts so…that number is about to drastically decline.
About Art, Andrew has been trying to convince me to post it (he’s…[Read more]
I should, but then again, I don’t wanna do schoooooool 😭
60k!! 🥳 Progress, girl!! It doesn’t matter if you’re going to cut a bit of it, you still wrote it and your writer muscles are that much stronger.
Hey, you know what, there is no way you’ll post anything more embarrassing than the stuff I have posted. Seriously. I still get migraines thinking…[Read more]
Yeah, school can be annoying sometimes, especially when you’re like me and have unpopular opinions on books…
Yes, actually, everything except my historical fiction is set in my fantasy/sci-fi world.
Yeah, it makes Andrew worry at times because he thinks he said something wrong and I’m just breaking down over some memory.
I’ll be praying for…[Read more]
The opinion part is the fun part for me, because my class loves hot takes. It’s the actual sitting down and getting work done that bothers me. Attention issues. 🥴 Do you go to a regular school?
Knew it. In the roleplay, Alpha mentioned a slyiad, and I was like ‘huh? You know what that is?’
It’s better to work through feelings than to clam up and…[Read more]