Gwyndalf the Wise

@keilah-h I’m going to get so depressed if I try to answer that question lol

@whalekeeper :((((

Also, apparently I haven’t shared the mock cover yet!! (At least in this forum) Here it is! (At the end of the story XD)

Also…

Look! I found little Hallie!! 🥰

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Ok guys… 👀 I know it’s a lot to read, but I’m dropping the last 6 chapters!! Enjoyyyy! And then give me alllll the feedback! I’m planning to finally start on the official third draft soon.

Chapter 27

Hallie rolled onto her back and let out a sigh, staring at the dark ceiling…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Girllll, you’re so sweetttt 🥹 Thank you so much!! Your comments mean so much and are one of the reasons I keep on going with this book bc I know there will other people out there who will like it just as much 😭🥰❤️

OMC GUYS GUYS GUYSSSSS
I FOUND A SONG FOR EASTON

It’s “Cars and Phones” by David Dunn

It almost made me cry but…

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Just in case… (also lmk if the doc isn’t working or you can’t edit/access it)

KP Connection Doc

@ellette-giselle Thank you!!!!

You are getting so much better at guys and girls!

I’m glad you think that! Been practicing a bit.

I have art, finally! Lol

Chell from the Portal games as she appears in my stories. Also, her brother, a fan character of mine. You might remember him if you’ve seen the Hero Forge image I posted a little while back. His name’s Alex, but he’s referred to by his middle name, Jonathan, because there’s another character that goes by his first n…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

She’s not childlike. She’s a phantom of her childhood, dancing on the wind by the power of lunchables and red 40.

lol that’s cool.

@grcr wowwww that looks awesome!!

@ellette-giselle yep, pretty real to me lol

I might try it! If I can find a place to get the song.

@ellette-giselle The way you talked about Sniper sounds like he’s in the room looking over my shoulder at what I’m typing lolllllll

Which would actually be terrifying for a few reasons. But hey, it’s not like I haven’t also insinuated that my characters actually exist and know what I think of them lol

Anyway, that song is super cool, fits Ro…[Read more]

@rae That sounds cool!

@ellette-giselle I don’t know. Either way could work.

Oh, never mind, you found the typo.

Other than that, the cover looks beautiful.

Also, I have a few suggestions for the back blurb.

• You accidentally wrote “These children are forbidden to form any emotional that might hinder their unwavering loyalty.” Should it be “emotional bond” instead?
• “Jonathan, the second-born” should maybe be something like “Jonathan, a second-born.” But that one can stay in if you really want…

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@ellette-giselle That looks really good!!

I’m assuming the number changes for each sector.

It reminds me a little bit of the insignias my brother designs for his Icebreaker Empire universe. (He hopes to someday make a video game with a tie-in book series.)

@ellette-giselle yay!

@ellette-giselle I know right? It’s hilarious!

@ellette-giselle I love those lolllll

why are those so much like the things my characters would say (the first one is such a Blue and Rinzler kind of conversation to have lolllll)