Gwyndalf the Wise

@ellette-giselle okay then!!

@whalekeeper haha it was super informal though, and I barely remember what we had to do.

I only remember my character: her name was Jayheart, and she was a brown WindClan medicine cat with a white paw and green eyes. Her name, appearance and personality influenced most of my OC’s of other fandoms afterward.

@theshadow 😁

@godlyfantasy12 ooh that’s a good scene!

Riven seems to be different than in your previous drafts. He’s a bit more conniving and less “I’m evil cause I can be!”

I’m a bit worried that what he calls “protecting” A’grend doesn’t mean truly protecting it. But maybe he’s telling the truth. I don’t know.

@ellette-giselle yikes! that’s messed up. Although I’m glad the rest of your team realized it was wrong.

Don’t graduate our MEDICAL STUDENTS with horrible grades. That’s just unwise.

actually saw a thing about that, where a girl and her parents actually sued the school she went to for graduating her with a high score when she can barely rea…[Read more]

@theshadow great job!! Can’t wait for more!

@godlyfantasy12

Ohhh, I’m kind of in a similar position as I’m writing the second draft of a WIP. I’m keeping some scenes, shuffling some around, and adding new ones. It’s been a fun juggling act 🥴😂

I don’t know how much of a plotter you are, but having a big picture idea of your plot is going to be super helpful. You don’t necessarily…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I agree with @hybridlore ‘s statements! I think that bit about Leon’s reaction might’ve been what I felt was missing from the scene.

@loopylin now how did I forget to tag Whaley *virtual facepalm*

“Woah. Look out, everybody,” she joked to the rest of the nearby empty hallway.

Nearly empty. Ugh, I hate that I can’t edit typos after a certain time limit.

People must be hungry or something

@theducktator

I have one other character wandering about. Could she join the Foreign Literature class whenever that happens?

Yeah she can join! Currently there’s just a few characters in the classroom chatting until the lesson starts.

Liko

“Well, you have the whole day ahead of you to make new friends. And with baking this good, I doubt it will…[Read more]

@rae I can’t remember if Felicity and Chase ever had a conversation before

@rae

Felicity 

Felicity strolled down the hall towards her first class of the day, late but not running. She paused as a middle school aged boy trudged past her, buried deep in his dark hoodie.

“Woah. Look out, everybody,” she joked to the rest of the nearby empty hallway. “Rain storm incoming.”

She smiled at the boy, brow creasing in the slig…[Read more]

@raxforge @koshka

The twins

Ellie shrugged. “It’s at seven. Whole school’s excited for it. Has been for days.”

Eddie leaned forward suddenly in her seat, eyeing Sypher. “How are doing that? The air around you ‘s all weird. Do you have superpowers?”

Why is everyone’s reaction to these little potatoes’ existence violence? Lol

Also, I am very honored to receive the couch potato award 😌

@whalekeeper wants to read this too probably

I love it! Anie’s accent is so much fun to read. And Riven is such an interesting but evil character

@hybridlore @keilah-h @freed_and_redeemed @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin

Here’s another scene! This is one I started in a previous draft and finished just recently. Again no critiques please! Not ready for that lol

November’s foot tapped against the marble flooring. His lips quirked to the side and he cleared his throat, glancing f…

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