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@dragon-snapper Signing off. I edited 600 something words.

@daeus I’m here.

@dragon-snapper I’m back for another half an hour or so.

@sleepwalkingmk Awesome. Yes, those look like good motivations, especially the protection aspect. A false sense of selflessness can go a long way to creating a compelling villain.

@lifeofkatie Got ya–thanks for the clarification! Yeah, not sure how much I can do about screen sizes, but I’ll see if I can resolve that. 🙂

What makes me trust a character is genuineness.
Although, what really gets me, is if it’s the main character. Or second MC, because no one expects the 2nd MC to be a badguy. Also, you should make him good friends, or supposedly so, with your MC. If Dianne trusts him, I will too. 😀

@DaughteroftheKing Yeah. What he said. XD

@DaughteroftheKing My own personal way of wording this (which is infinitely better than Kate’s way, by the way) is that you want the villain to seem like an enemy of the villain. At least, that’s one good way to do it. There are probably others.

So, like Kate was saying, you want him to seem like he has secrets. People are naturally going to…[Read more]

@ethryndal *gasp* How could you?
*fires some dragon snapper fireworks for you*

Well, I’m getting closer to my goals. I reached Chapter 10, and have also reached 20,000 words. Yay!

@daeus Tag me when you come back. 😀

@northerner Hmmm, no. But it could be. XD

@dragon-snapper Okay, signing off now. I got some editing done. Be back later.

@dragon-snapper thanks, I’ll check it out. 😀

@DaughteroftheKing *excessively evil chuckling*

This topic.

I likey.

Well, it sounds like you have a good thing going already— he seems a very detailed, duplicitous character just on the surface without people knowing he’s got an evil layer, and that’s brilliant. If the character seems complete as he is (with his own little contradictions…[Read more]

@Kina-lamb You can, actually. You can memorize as many verses together as you want.

@gideon-sowdon can you memorize passages on scripturetyper?

Wow. I haven’t posted on here in a looooong time, but in the meantime I’ve been busy! Now that I’ve finished all the memorization required for Bible Bee, I decided to post it here as an encouragement + motivation for y’all. 😀

These are the passages I’ve memorized recently:

Colossians 1:16, 1 Corinthians 15:1-4, Genesis 1:1-5, Psalm 29:3-4,…[Read more]

@daeus Great!