@gretald
Active 8 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #7 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@graciegirl @daeus I’ll be working on my WIP.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #7 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@graciegirl I’ll join you. I’m doing some grammar checking and such.
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Daeus replied to the topic What do ya'll think about taking breaks? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@winter-rose It’s fine to wait for the second draft before you take a break. Probably best actually.
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Scripture Memorization! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@jadamae Sweet! Yes, reviewing is TOUGH because it can get discouraging if it’s been awhile since you reviewed… I’m finding that out. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic What do ya'll think about taking breaks? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
*cringes at all the beautiful sensible comments and retreats inside her dragonish shell*
@Winter-Rose umm… unfortunately the longest break I’ve ever taken, with all eight* novels I’ve finished, is… um… one night.
Literally. One night between novels and then I can’t wait any longer. I probably should take longer breaks… don’t kill me…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@Winter-Rose @GracieGirl thank you both for your prayers, and yes, Gracie— I’ll pray. 😉 I don’t imagine something like that comes without a lot of emotional turmoil in the family too.
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Snapper replied to the topic My Time Travel Book in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus I have sent it to you. Be brutal. Fight hard against poor literature. 😉 May the force be with you.

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Hope Ann replied to the topic My Time Travel Book in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus Sounds good. I think you have my email from last time.
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Daeus replied to the topic My Time Travel Book in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
Oh! I forgot! And I’m looking for a Brittish beta-reader too. I’ve got two characters who are modern Britts, and I have very little idea how modern Britts talk. If you happen to know any Brittish people who might be interested, I would be appreciative.
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Snapper replied to the topic My Time Travel Book in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus No, I can do the second one. At first it seemed like you were going to do three main groups, because you had nearing 9 beat-readers. But the second one is fine. I’ll be on vacation soon anyways, so this works best.
Will do.
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Daeus replied to the topic What do ya'll think about taking breaks? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@dragon-snapper Okay, well, you can be part of the first round if you think that would be best.
Go ahead and send me the manuscript right away.
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Snapper replied to the topic My Time Travel Book in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus Okay, sounds good. Though do keep in mind that I will be starting school mid-August.
When should I send you my manuscript? -
Daeus replied to the topic My Time Travel Book in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@hope Sure.
@his-instrument While I don’t have time to completely beta read it, I could brainstorm with you about the overall plot, characterization, theme, and stuff like that. I might be able to beta read the first couple chapters too, just for stylistic stuff. I don’t know for sure, but we’ll wait and see. -
Snapper replied to the topic What do ya'll think about taking breaks? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus Yes. That’s what I failed to do. As long as you’re working on something, you should be okay. @winter-rose
Don’t be like Dragon Snapper. Don’t not write for more than a few days. Dragon Snapper is being nice and giving you a great example of what not to do. -
Hope Ann replied to the topic What do ya'll think about taking breaks? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@winter-rose Breaks? What are those? Who has time for breaks? XD
I do leave a project for a little bit when I’m done with it, but I never actually take a break from writing because I’ve several projects going at a time. To get a good perspective on a manuscript, yes… taking a break for a few weeks or months (I’ve heard months is good but have…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic My Time Travel Book in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus This book comes highly recommended. 😀 Though… I don’t have time for a page by page beta reading like I did last time. I should be able to read it through in a month and jot notes on each chapter or anything plot or character wise that catches my eye if that works for you.
As for a manuscript swap… even if it wasn’t taken, 170,000 is a…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic What do ya'll think about taking breaks? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
I half agree with you @dragon-snapper. If you work on a new project during your break, I think it’s fine though.
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Snapper replied to the topic What do ya'll think about taking breaks? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@winter-rose No. Don’t do it. Do not take a break.
Here’s my logic, cause I know I’m going against practically every person’s opinion in the world about taking breaks in writing.
Personally, when I finished my novel, I was like ‘yeah, I’ll take a break’, so I did. Ouch. I will never ever do that again. It broke me. Yeah. I wasn’t able to write…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic What do ya'll think about taking breaks? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@winter-rose Breaks aren’t absolutely necessary, but they are really helpful. If you feel like your work is a sloppy mess, it’s more likely that you need a break from it. But I don’t think that means you have to keep it from your alpha reader. What you might do is just let her read it and give you her thoughts, but don’t look at her thoughts until…[Read more]
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Jess replied to the topic What do ya'll think about taking breaks? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@winter-rose I think breaks are great. A break for a month or so has worked for me to get a new perspective on things. It really helps to leave something alone for a little while because you can start afresh. But, this:
Don’t wait until your story is ‘ready’ to share it, or it will never be ready.
As Brandon said, Alpha and beta readers are there…[Read more]
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