@grcr
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@grcr I don’t know what kind of party it is, haha! You guys can decide, but I have some ideas.
A birthday party? (I wasn’t sure on this one, because we’d have to decide who’s birthday it is)
A costume party?
A fall harvest party?
A super bowl party?
These are just random thoughts, so if you have more, please post! Thank you!
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Sara started the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @esther-c @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @trailblazer @whalekeeper @acancello @grcr @anyone-else
You…and your favorite character…are invited to a party! Similar to a character castle, we’ll introduce our characters and they can interact with each other to help with character building. Also, because why not?
A side…[Read more]
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Sara posted an update 1 year, 2 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @grcr @acancello @jonas @hybridlore
Guys don’t you find it weird that there’s 907 members on KP (it says at the bottom of the screen when you click on “community”) and there’s only a few that are on here a lot? WHERE ARE ALL THE OTHERS? haha! I’m kind of hyper, I had a double shot espresso right before my volleyball game…[Read more] -
whaley replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Sara replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
You are so lucky to have a mom who you can go to for advice on writing! I love my mom and she’s basically my best friend, but when it comes to writing, I’m on my own. She doesn’t like the kind of writing I write because she gets really sad and depressed when the scenes are sad. Same with my dad.
I had to teach myself how to write up until…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@grcr I know several others already commented on this, but I wanted to add one more thing about the descriptions that might help. Given that this is the first chapter of your book, I think it would be helpful to find a way to start it off with more action, or some way to hook the reader. It didn’t pull me in very well, but once I got past the…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
no worries! I’m busy too, lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Skyraptor
“Say, how’d you come here?” Evander asked.
Skyraptor shrugged. “I have no idea…..I fell asleep on my master’s ship and woke up here.”
“Master?” Gus asked.
“A human. He adopted me before I even hatched out of my egg.” she explained. “He and I have a special connection…but I can’t sense him at all right now. He…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yay!!! Thank you!!! 🙂
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Sara replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
And btw…I tagged you where I posted my WIP if you’re interested 🙂
I’ll be patient…It’s that good!!!
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Here’s my WIP if you’re interested! And don’t feel pressured to read it if you’re busy (or just don’t want to!, I understand that life gets complicated and busy!
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Sara replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Just read this! You did a great job with helping me connect with the characters. They feel so real!!!
I like your descriptions, but like others are saying, they were kind of long. I think it would help if you spread the descriptions out along the chapter instead of making them into one long paragraph. I’ve struggled with this as well, so…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Skyraptor
For once, a thought came through loud and clear from the tiger–Evander, he said he was called.
She could see him swimming in the ocean, chased by a pack of dog-like creatures.
Odd….who would go up against that huge of a cat? even in a pack?
Gus, the sheep-like one (that’s what he is right whaley?), explained…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Ooo, excerpts. Thank you for sharing! I like this Blair and Shannon. (Poetry, huzzah!)
I also relished the way you incorporated the poem he was reading into the opening. When the poem stopped and the dialogue began, it was like when the curtains on a stage are first pulled back.
I do agree that the descriptions were a little hard to get…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Cool! I didn’t have time to read it in full detail yet, but one thing that stood out to me skimming it was the description felt a bit heavy-handed. First you describe Blair, then his room, then Shannon, and then Belle. All of them were pretty long paragraphs of just description, and it gets a bit tiring.
Anyways, just what I noticed. I’ll…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Gus
The cat drooped.
“I’m sorry, Evander, for whatever must’ve happened to you,” Gus said, bowing his head respectfully. “At least now, you’re right safe, and ain’t that a blessing?”
One of only a few blessings. But it was better than being given nothing at all.
Gus furrowed his snowy brow, and tapped a rhythm with his hoof i…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 2 months ago
I hope so!
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Sara replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 2 months ago
@grcr @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
Yeah i just tried and the green bar thingy loads but then it goes away and nothing happens. I’ve hit refresh multiple times but it doesn’t work 🙁
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Sara replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 2 months ago
I tried a half-hour ago and it still doesn’t work :(((
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Sara replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 2 months ago
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My hands were shaking so bad!
Yeah. I’m guessing there are people who joined and basically just “left” but didn’t delete their accounts.
@jonas
yeah it’s kind of sad 🙁 I love KP
A lot of people joined a long time ago and are adults now, so don’t really have time for KP I guess. Other ppl join and then NEVER come on. But 907 does seem pretty high.
Also there’s an age limit, so once you turn 25 or something like that, you can’t use it anymore. I’m not sure if your account is deleted after that, but yeah, basically what @highscribeofaetherium said.
lol, yeah… I think about that often…. 🙃 Cloaked Mystery is probably right.
By the way, if at all possible, do not drink double shot espresso before a game. (totally not speaking from experience)
lol
I saw this post called “character castle” and I really think it’d be fun, but there’s already too many characters, so should I make another one, and if I did would you guys join?
If you don’t know what a character castle is, there’s one in the section “general writing discussions” I believe.
Oh, sorry this is late! If you make another, I would definitely join!
okay! I’ll tag you when I do!
Yeah, like Highscribe said, they might be adults and not have time, or just super busy people 🙂
I think there is a Character castle 2.0, but its not as popular as #1, I think @freedomwriter76 and @whalekeeper and @godlyfantasy12 know most about it 😀
@acancello
I was also thinking…what if I made a “character castle” without a castle, in a different place, like “character treehouse” (okay that sounds lame, but you know what I mean) or “character birthday party” or something like that?