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@grcr

You know what I can’t stand? When you write something and KP deletes it and asks “are you sure you wanted to do that?” Oh, no, I just wanted to write posts so they could be deleted. It’s my favorite thing. OF COURSE I DID OR I WOULDN”T WAVE WASTED THE TIME WRITING IT!

Anyways.

Ah Markus… Long story with no good ending. B…

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@grcr

alright then, that works.

Yes, I am really looking forward to hearing more about him. I have to dig up that drawing you did…….

@grcr

That was hands down the best chapter yet, and Ira is my favorite character. I just feel like I really know him! The opening paragraph is amazing and you really get hooked in. You also gave us enough info that a 13-year-old talking politics, economics, and government as reasonably as he was is not surprising.

The only thing I caught was the…[Read more]

@grcr that lighting is so pretty <3

@grcr

Your art always looks so soft and gentle. I like the Markus art best because of how dynamic the line art is.

Oh, and I see two other people have used the name Ira. XD It’s a lovely name

@grcr

Wow!!! Love the one of the girl!!! But what is happening to poor Markus! I must know!!! (Hey! I have an Ira. And he’s dark haired and blue eyed. But you can’t really have an Ira that didn’t look that way) I like his drawing. The thing that throws me is his hair being see-through over the eyes. Other than that, it’s really good!

@grcr you are SO GOOD at art, girl. If I knew how, I’d hire you to illustrate my current WIP.

@grcr

UGH! KP signed me out as I was typing! That’s a new one. *sulks*

Let’s try this again……

I’m starting to get a feel for the amount of siblings! I pick a few to keep an eye on and the rest sort of come and go. It’s like getting to know a family with a tone of kids. (which is what it is, lol)

This was a great chapter and I really…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Thanks! It was really fun to experiment with.

@grcr

They look great! That’s an impressive project. I hope it turns out well!

@grcr

600+? That’s… a lot of characters… You’ve got a lot of patience.

How long did it take you to do just those 28?

@grcr

I’ll just casually pretend that I didn’t read that. 

Pure genius! 😉

I probably should go through and add things to differentiate/clarify. I most likely will, idk.

The first two chapters of this book are really difficult, but I promise things become a bit easier later.

Got it! And I get the struggle. You don’t want to info dump or…[Read more]

@grcr

I don’t know who got shot!

@grcr

Good scene! I’m still not really sure what happened at the end… but yeah, I was expecting the dad to die too. 😅🥲

I like the siblings too (although their names are confusing, haha.)

@grcr

You are very welcome!!

Okay sounds good.

Okay, for a little more editorial feedback…..

and Emrysrushed

Second to last paragraph, you just need a space there.

And then structurally,

Put your right hand to your chest…”

This seems a little odd, because 1. it is one of the more standard ways of swearing an oath, and 2. as a sol…[Read more]

@grcr

Ooo! This is interesting!!

(I actually thought the dad was gonna die in this chapter from scene 1…. so I’m relieved that he made it. XD)

A few typos I caught, but at this point I’m not sure what sort of feedback you’re looking for, so let me know. This is interesting and I’m eager to keep reading if you post more!

So man y kids… and…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Thank you! 😃

It’s a paper sketch with pencil, which I scanned into Ibis paint (my new fav!) isolated the pencil lines and darkened them (It even has a tool for this it’s the best) and then used digital brushes for the rest. The watercolor bleed brush is amazing it almost looks real!

@grcr

Thank you!!!

@rae  @loopylin @mineralizedwritings  @grcr

Oh cool! I love all of these!!!

MIN!! you have a Tauren too!!!??

@grcr

Not that bored? Lol.

@grcr

Would you like to do statistics homework with me? XD