@grcr
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year ago
The moral is hypocrisy. To do evil on someone means that you yourself have done evil, regardless of what name you have committed it under.
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @rae @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @hanako @acancello @hybridlore @anyone
This is a short story I had to write for my creative writing class. I thought I’d share it here as well. I’m not necessarily looking for feedback–I got plenty already–but if you have any thoughts, feel free to share them.
Blade of the…[Read more]
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Sara posted a new activity comment 1 year ago
@grcr
You got it right!
I want to say 50…but i feel like it’s a trick question XD -
Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@rae @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @grcr
Who wants to continue this conversation?
Our original plan to start the next day in the morning (yesterday) utterly failed lol.
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Oh my gosh…this is amazing! I love Blair <3
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
This looks really interesting!! I’m excited to see more of this, I think the characters have a lot of potential!
I think some of the dialogue from Blair seems a little forced, if that makes sense.
Mainly just this paragraph:
“I know, but I really hate the shallow conversations.” He moaned, “I never feel like I can express my opini…
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
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RAE posted an update 1 year ago
@grcr How do you do the characters on your cover image?
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I just searched AI generated characters into google and saved the ones I liked/thought-looked-closest-to-my-characters. Then I put them all together as a pic and loaded it. 🙃
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Okay, just curious.
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Okay. I guess we could just have them stay behind.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Ok.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Okay, we’ll miss you. Do you want Flaz and Lane to actually go away, or should we just drag them along and ignore them? That’s what we’re doing with Kaine, and it would mean that if you wanted to rejoin eventually, you could. It would also help not break continuity, since “canonically” they can’t leave.
Or @rae, do you think we could have…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Ok. We’ll miss you and your charries 🙂
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Sara replied to the topic Characters of England | A 19th Century Role Play in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Aww we’ll miss you, but I understand.
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RAE posted a new activity comment 1 year ago
@grcr That may be hard, since the two sides of Glace happen at two different times of his life.
His childhood/adolescence/and early adult like are the before, and the after is after he takes the fall for someone else (he didn’t even tell his sister or father that he really didn’t do it) and got banished from the Fettian empire. That’s the after. -
RAE posted a new activity comment 1 year ago
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Well, yeah, both.
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@grcr That may be hard, since the two sides of Glace happen at two different times of his life.
His childhood/adolescence/and early adult like are the before, and the after is after he takes the fall for someone else (he didn’t even tell his sister or father that he really didn’t do it) and got banished from the Fettian empire. That’s the after.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@rae @hanako @savannah_grace2009 @grcr
Kari
The game of Truth or Dare abruptly stalled as this new arrival appeared out of thin air. With all the other crazy things that had been happening, Kari wasn’t too surprised. She’d believe almost anything now.
“Hey, want to join us?” Hedieh called out. “We’re playing Truth or Dare.”
I’m more…[Read more]
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RAE posted a new activity comment 1 year ago
@grcr The before he changes, or after?
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Both! JK, before he changes.
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@jonas I just remembered you voted for Glace too. Look above cuz I posted something on him.
@grcr jk?-
Well, yeah, both.
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@grcr That may be hard, since the two sides of Glace happen at two different times of his life.
His childhood/adolescence/and early adult like are the before, and the after is after he takes the fall for someone else (he didn’t even tell his sister or father that he really didn’t do it) and got banished from the Fettian empire. That’s the after.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@rae @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @hanako
Ok, I may or may not have been reading the pillow fight scene while I was supposed to be trying to sleep last night… but it made me laugh so much! (I’m also glad I don’t have to read twelve pages this morning lol) This RP has changed so much from the beginning!
Give me a sec to figure out exactly…[Read more]
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Ha ha! 😄
(yeah, Hanako and I said 50 at first too lol)
Could his sister be dead?
Weeeelllll…. She’s not dead yet…
She is 98!
if Tom was 4, his sister was 2 (there is a two year gap). If Tom is 100, she is 98 (cuz the gap didn’t change). lol
Oh my gosh. I feel so stupid now….lol
lol 😅