@grcr
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months ago
Aww thanks girl <3
Don’t be sad!!!! I only thought of it because the whole scene felt winter and cold and dead to me. Like those feelings just mirrored Sef’s. It was you writing her so well that made me think of it. Actually, the other day i was thinking, “Man, she is so good! Look at hers compared to mine!” lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
Awesome!! I’ll tag a few more of you too.
@stephie @theshadow @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @rae @linus-smallprint @grcr @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed
OK all, how is this for a story starter? I want to honestly know if it catches y’all attention.
Prologue
7/10/2065
Night had fallen over the capital…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months ago
@grcr (CASSIAN SCENE ALERT) @ellette-giselle @esther-c @rae @jonas @whalekeeper @highscribeofatherium
This scene isn’t really edited either…
But let me know if it makes sense AT ALL
Chapter 5
Birdie
“I love birds,” Sef sang as she spread her arms wide, mimicking the birds soaring overhead, silhouetted against the bright blue sky.
She lov…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 months ago
#relatable
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Stephie replied to the topic Book Club 🙂 in the forum Book Discussions 4 months ago
@esther-c @theducktator @folith-feolin @grcr @theshadow
This is a final call to anyone who would like to make suggestions. Tomorrow we’re going to move on to voting, if I can get to it tonight or tomorrow morning. Otherwise we’ll have to wait another day, because I’m kind of bogged up with summer school. Thanks! 🙂
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 months ago
@grcr yesssss
I have that meme saved in my screenshots lol
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months ago
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
@keilah-h I know; it’s been a long time coming 🥰😂
@grcr don’t worry….he’ll get there soon 👀
@rae I do understand. Forgiveness is a lot harder than people realize, and though I tend to forgive others fairly easily and instead withhold forgiveness more from myself, I do understand how hard it can be💖
But don’t worry, Leon will get…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
@savannah_grace2009 @rae @mineralizedwritings @koshka @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD
Since I showed y’all where Riker is, here’s the most recent Leon scene👀
“‘And we know that all things work together for good to them that love God, to them who are the called according to his purpose.’”
Tears burned Leon’s…
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
DROPPING THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
Just so you know, it’s not edited…heh…heh…
so just bear with me XD
Tags: @jonas @grcr @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @ellette-giselle @rae @and-my-brain-stopped-working
“Please! Someone help me!” Neveah gasped for breath, frantically scanning the crowds for a familiar face.
Where could Sef have gon…
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RAE replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 4 months, 1 week ago
@highscribeodaetherium @grcr @theshadow I posted it ^^^
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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 1 week ago
Thanks!
Oh, I’m interested!
Okay. I’ll wait for a couple more opinions before I decide to post it. Good to know at least one person is interested though!
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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 1 week ago
For once I actually drew something I’m not greatly ashamed to show…
@freed_and_redeemed @grcr @trailblazer @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @theshadow
This is a picture of Tomoko from that short story I shared with you. Sorry about the poor quality, our scanner likes to give everything a greenish or yellowish…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
why Nico left, where is the baby from the prologue, who are the two different groups here. I know you have hinted at it a little in the prologue, but I’d still like more back story and more info. I tend to be a little more like Tolkine in writing, as in, I have a backstory for everyone, and most of the time, %60 percent of the b…
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
Hi!! Ive missed you!!
Ah, that’s ok! As long as you’re happy. Forensic science is cool! What makes you kinda want to do that?
So I toured a high school and they had a forensic science booth, I told my Mom I thought it was super cool and shes going to buy the curriculum for it next year (I dont want to go to public high school yet XD) The…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
@savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @grcr @freed_and_redeemed @anyone
Hi guys!! Man, it’s been a long time since I’ve been on here 🙂 But yeah, lifes been… different? How are you doing? How’s your WIP’s?
About the Pinterest board, well I think I’m done with writing (for now, but who knows?). I was really thinking about it a few months ago and real…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
@grcr @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @acancello (I’m still going to tag you until you come back) @anyone-else
See above post ⬆⬆⬆
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 4 months, 1 week ago
No problem. Someone else mentioned it seemed out of place, and maybe use a part of it later.
Glad it was funny though!
Ok, in just a sec I’ll send chapter two. Let me skim it real quick to make sure there aren’t any horrid errors that are clearly visible. lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 4 months, 1 week ago
So keep the fountain sword scene or not? Now I’m confused. lol.
No your suggestions are amazing! They are just what I have been looking for!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 4 months, 1 week ago
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