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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
😂
That’s crazy. Colorado is kind of notorious for that, I thought, but I’ve never been to your state before.
I don’t kill characters without a reason. I don’t even kill them. My badguys do.
Ahem—I don’t see much of a reason for Conrad’s death. Aaron and Adrian can be explained, I guess, but there’s still lots of other people yo…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yup! You’ll have to be quicker on the draw. 😂
but I don’t even think it’s that extreme there.
Nope, not Colorado. Weather changes like that are normal for us in our crazy state. This is life, y’all. We don’t get spring and fall. Just winter and summer.
Oh boy… I was shocked. 🥺😢 But, then Julian and Leon wouldn’t have become Christi…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
LOVE THEM!!!!!!! (also, KP WON’T GIVE ME NOTIFS!!!) sorry for the delay in response.
I love them so muuuuucccchhhh!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Oh no! @liberty beat me! XD
yesterday it was 80 degrees.
Today it’s 5 and snowing.
That’s rather strange . . . 🤔 Sounds like Colorado, but I don’t even think it’s that extreme there. Today we have a high of nearly 80.
He died in the beginning of book 2. Hybridelore almost killed me for it.
(it was a rather brutal scene………
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
yesterday it was 80 degrees.
Today it’s 5 and snowing.
what a life!
🤣
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Good morning!!! You’re bright and early! Normally Hybridlore is my first reader. Looks like you got her place! 😂
That makes sense about Conrad.
Can I know Conrad’s whole story?
The whole thing? Girl, it’s like a whole ‘nother book! I know the whole life of every character who has a name, (and even some who don’t). It’s just part of h…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
October 7th
The EmpireAs you will see by yesterday’s entries, I have returned to the Empire. It took all of yesterday to chronicle everything that happened to Ro…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Neat! I loved the part of when the lion came to rescue them. As soon as I read about that lion I knew it was there to protect them!!!! That happened to a character of mine as well.
Cool!!! I really liked the idea of a Daniel twist. Plus, it gives me Narnia fkashbacks with Shasta in the desert. That just makes me happy. 😊
Hmm…the part w…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yes!!! They’re back!
Glad you liked it!
Lol 🤣
I try.
This did seem a little out of place. I’m not sure if there’s something else he could say—I think he was sort of teasing, but still, it stuck out to me.
Okay yeah, makes sense. The odd thing about editing is I can’t get back into the character’s heads in the same way, so somet…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 7 months ago
I can’t do discord 🙁
Idk about Slack, I’ll have to ask my mom.
We already have Groupme for crew, so I can do that, I just don’t know how well it’d work for us.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Chase
“A l-little.” Chase watched her for a moment, before sitting down near her. “I l-like green.”
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
You’re totally fine. Thanks! 😁
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
And Everett’s . . .

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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago

This is Juliet’s.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Does Everette have a board??? I want an Everette board!!!
I can post his and Juliet’s in a minute . . .
I hope one of them dies in the end.
Really? 🙄🤣
I’m also hoping Everette and Sara get married in the future. So… maybe he shouldn’t die.
I will reveal nothing . . . 🤭
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yayyy!! They’re back! 🥰
This was a good section too.
The one that seems to be their leader is extremely bold, and he doesn’t seem to care what anyone says— or throws at him.”
Leon smirked, having a hard time stifling a laugh. He could guess who that was
Lol 🤣
Hi Julian, we’re back.”
This did seem a little out of place. I’m…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
But it’s so sad when the favotite character dies!!! And I love crying over books!!
If they don’t die she at least needs to make life miserable for them for a few chapters. You never know if you’re hero has what it takes until you throw him in the thick of it. I have high hopes for both, and I want to see them live up to…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Does Everette have a board??? I want an Everette board!!!
He and Alec are my favorite.
I hope one of them dies in the end.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I TOLD YOU I MET HER IN REAL LIFE!!!!!
Maybe all our writing has come to life and our characters are walking around in different places!! (sounds like a movie or something)
It could be kinda scary if some of my villains got loose. 😂
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