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NEXT SECTION!!!

Two days later, Leon was walking home from visiting the Krügers in the late evening. He was nearly home when someone called out, “You there, what’s your business?”

Leon turned around and saw a young soldier lean…

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@esther-c

Hiiii Esther! I just saw this!!!
I have a critique for Easton’s character arc.

You’ve been having him do all these things for Tyler, and having him trying to encourage Tyler.

Do you mean to have him come off as kind of distant and cold? like Shadow said, he feels really impersonal.

What I mean is, in your book are you trying to show…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

I was gonna give people a chance to catch up while I busy myself shooting and poor characters and dumping them out of airplanes……. but I think I’ll post the next section now.

@rae

You should make a photo copy of the sketch and try out the colors you have in your mind on that, and if you like it, then go for it, but if not, you have the backup. That’s what I always do. I never color the original, I like to keep a backup. Plus, colored pencils tend to smear when mixed with graphite.

@whalekeeper

YES!!! DO!!!

@whalekeeper

Celarent

Those were terrible reasons to not teach. “Why does she work here if she won’t teach us anything?”

@whalekeeper

So you aren’t ugly. You just don’t care for my questions. *raises eyebrow* I shall have to guess. Scared of COVID? Hiding from the police? Part of a circus?

Did you agree to go out with any of these random strangers? Are you married? If you were a vegetable, what vegetable would you be and why?

@the_lost-journal @whalekeeper

The Protector—Gabriel

“Yes, my birthmarks aren’t a mental illness, but that doesn’t mean that people don’t hate me, or judge me. If I was not the Protector, if I didn’t wear the mask, if I didn’t hide the birthmarks, I would have been killed by the people I protect everyday.” Gabriel clears his throat again, v…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Is Marcel here? Because if he is, he might get pelted with apologies from Chase

@loopylin @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Well, I guess it’s a go for finalizing the sketch and then coloring it. I have a few coloring choices I’m deciding on. I might add a starry backdrop, and make his hair silver, or just do like it’s daytime. That’s why the top part of the page is devoid of anything at the moment.

Tbh, after an experience…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @the_lost-journal

The Protector—Gabriel

“So it wasn’t a flippant reason after all. That’s surprising.” Gabriel’s voice sounds young again. His hand moves towards his own mask, hesitates, then slightly dislodges it. A small sliver of skin showing a small cluster of strange birthmarks on his jaw, could be seen. He shows them to C…[Read more]

@rae

WOW!!!!!! So good! The expression!!!!!! That is SO Baron!! Yes, this is perfect!

@loopylin @ellette-giselle

Really sorry for the bad quality. The splotch by his mouth is not supposed to be there btw. This is my sketch so far for Baron. I’ve gone through many different poses, and was wondering for feedback, how good is this?

@whalekeeper

Stares at the interviewer for a long time until they get the gist] “…Cosmetics.”

*stares back* So you’re ugly then.

*peers back at meme topic* Have you ever had a stranger ask you on a date?

@esther-c

I just realized I forgot to reply here.😬 Good section!

Hallie just wanted to be dateless for the rest of high school just to spite Katrina.

*snorts* Take out the first “just” though.

@whalekeeper

Ewwwwww.

@the_lost-journal

Cool! We do confirmations too, but don’t change our names.

@whalekeeper

Ewww, you’re holding it?! Slugs are cute, but they’re so slimy!

@the_lost-journal @whalekeeper

The Protector—Gabriel

Gabriel leaned close to Leander, whispering, “He doesn’t know what ‘flippancy’ means, does he?”

I need to develop Gabriel’s dialogue more. He has chosen an interesting word choice, and I like it.

@whalekeeper @the_lost-journal

The Protector—Gabriel

Gabriel turned back towards Arnan and Leander. “I already know why you wear a mask. To you, it is merely a flippancy.”