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@esther-c

I would just like to see it set up a little more at the very beginning chapters.

I know you’re going for chaos on the Sunday morning before church, but like I mentioned before, since Easton and Hallie’s family is a big one, I think you need to focus more on their family and the dynamics. I’d love to see Hallie’s closeness with her mom…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! you’re the best and I always love exchanging ideas with you <3

I LOVE LITTLE HALLIE

@esther-c

yeah, Cars and Phones BROKE ME

Last week my mom was at Mayo Clinic in Rochester doing more cancer treatments, which was hard since it wasn’t planned. I guess even if it was, it would be hard since she was gone for over a week and me and my siblings and my dad were all missing her a lot and attempting to keep our house from going out of…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Someone suggested I cut the last section of the blurb and leave it with the part about Jonathan’s friendship because it has more of a cliffhanger. What do you think?

@whalekeeper

On here works great!

Also, any thoughts on the book cover?

@keilah-h

also mmm, I love cheesecake.

Why do I feel like Sniper would like cheesecake? XD. I don’t know, I can just picture him denying that he enjoys it.

@loopylin @theducktator @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @keilah

Thanks everyone!

@grcr

*Gaspeth!!!*

What have you done!!!

🤣

Well, there goes that. XD

@theducktator

don’t encourage me.

@ellette-giselle

DON’T YOU DARE. *hides Evan*

@theducktator

Aha, thank you. Fixed that.

Thank you so much for the feedback!!!!

DON’T KILL EVAN. I BEG YOU.

Oh how tantalizing this sounds…….. it would be such a sad death scene……………..

@ellette-giselle

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

I thought all of them were. I guess Jonathan would be most interesting though.

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

I always forget about Brian. He should…[Read more]

@theducktator

Awesome, thank you so much!!

@ellette-giselle

Nice! You hyphenated firstborn though, which is one word.

@rae

I’m glad you had fun! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!🥳🥳🥳

@hybridlore

I filled out your feedback form!

@rae

I’m so glad it went well!!!! Happy Birthday, by the way!

@rae

Yay!!! I am so glad that you had a good time!!!!! And I am so glad that you did it! That sounds like an amazing day!

Also,

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon

I was gonna update you last night, but I figured I’d wait and give you all the tea in one post.

Today we did it! We went out to all the little shops, and it was awesome! Four (three of which I wanted to look at sadly) were closed, but we still got to go to three…[Read more]